Honest Feedback for Serious Poets

Completely honest feedback.
Just leave titles, and/or links.

I'll say what I think, and nothing else.

Blind praise is a no-no.
As is sugar-coated comments.

No cliche, overused and unoriginal poems please!
If you make me read one of these, I'll be even more harsh as I've clearly asked against these.

Thanks!!

Feel free to return the favour, although this isn't compulsory.

All the poems you comment on mine you say is teenage drama or this is definitally a teenage poem. Before you say that again i just want you to know im a teenager :D k okay :) anyways I want your advice on 'Too Far' I know its a teenage poem BUT I want to know what I can do to it.

Thanks Babe

Erotic Bliss [Acrostic]

Thank you.

Marcella

Brittney, I'm a teenager too. I don't use that excuse. :)

I will now though haha.

I've done those.

can you please do my poem

- a frozen summer

its metaphorical.. as are most of your poems.. so i hope you enjoy it :D

Addiction
Tears are the Waterfall
The Bottle

thanks so much, and if you wanna leave me a couple titles i'll do yours.

Thanks!!

I've done them...

Done..

Thanks for the comment... but i can still use that excuse :D You say they are teenagish.. so I explain why. I write what I feel like.. and yah.. thanks for the comment

wow. very generous of you! i would appreciate comments on... 'that man', 'encomium for a king', 'flagellation', 'devouring elements', 'what is mine'. any of those would be great! i'll be sure to return the favor! thank you, silverj. -beav

it is been long time since i heard a comment by you, i will appriciate any comments on my new poems...........thanks

Thy Sweet Perfection

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=848665

Please and Thank you, Joe

would you mine reading "just one poem," by jarrod. i think you'll find it befitting of this forum quite a bit.

Read "A soldiers fate" =)

Hey you!! I just thought maybe you would like to comment on my new poem..

"Do I Know You?"

Just posted it 5 minutes ago.. It'd be greatly appericated... Thanks Babe!

ok i want your advice on one of my poems called morphine drip. its a poem about the loss of a friend and it needs work help!!

I would like you to read my poems and tell me if there is any hope for me or not...i would really like to improve...
thanx...Jonda Beth
(especially Your Dying Secret)

Done, done - done, done - done, done!!!

Haha, yes! The site is annoying like that. How on earth we're expected to improve and edit, without an edit allowence, is beyond me!
But, you're welcome indeed, I very much enjoyed your work.

Hey... Well, I know I'm still learning to write better and still have much more to learn - but I figure if you can't learn through a good honest critique, how are you going to learn? So I hope my writing doesn't annoy you too much ;)... The three that I would love a good nit picking at are:

And We Dance...
Your Last Moment, My Last Breath *(I like the title, for not for this particular poem...)
Hear Me

They're not exactly brand new, but oh well. Thanks in advance, on behalf of all of us, I'm gonna say how much I appreciate it. Stay wonderful, best wishes. -Stefhy

Thanks Silver!

Dear Silver,

If you are still doing this thing, please go through my works "My Languid Loneliness" and "Iceage".

well thanks for your honesty on my poem. will you do two more of them for me if time permits : dear god, and to my niece? thanks again and thanks ahead

nessa

Voodoo Doll
People Always Leave
Toothbrush ...

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/nature/poems.php?id=847864

thank yooh sooooo much! lol much appriciated

If you're still doing this... I was wondering if you would read my newest poem, The Modest Rose. I know I already asked you to read before but, it would be much appreciated.

marcella

Rapture
Or
Black