Ugh.. help?

Okay, people are down voting my poem A Vague Memory, and they're not leaving me comment telling me why. Could you please comment AND vote please?
This is 1 for 2. Make sure you leave titles.

No love or friendship poems please, I can't comment on them.

Thanks!

I agree, people should not down vote poems, unless they tell you about your flaws, anwyays, I commented and rated this poem it was a 5/5 for sure, and that is the honest truth,

If you could do these 2 of mine,
Black
and
On the Edge

that'd be awesome,

Ugh. I hate when people do that. Could you look at whichever one of the more recent poems you are able to do.

I'm off to read it.

It's a good poem just not five material. No poem here is.

hi hun. i thought you did really well. the flow was a little broken but i enjoyed it! i commented and voted. your sitting on an average of 4 after 22 votes so id say your doing great!!
Could you please look at any of my featured poems? just choose any you like. thanks babe.
Much love and many kisses,
Bex

Thanks so much you guys! I'm finished with all of yours!