They're Just Jealous.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Alright, so if you go look at my profile you will notice wonderfully low ratings.
    Downraters are obviously near-by.
    Now, I'm not saying go vote a five. No. I'm asking for honest comments and honest votes. Not ones that are obviously bouts of jealousy.

    So. Enjoy.
    All favors will be returned doubled.
    LEAVE TITLES. Or you won't get the comments and votes.
    NO friendship or love poems.

    ***Down are a list of 11 poems of mine badly downrated. You attack that list [with very short poems] I'll do 25!! of yours. Deal? =] Titles of mine below.***

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Sheena is one of the best poets on this site.
    I done three. They were excellent.

    Please do:

    -Dig my grave [Parquette]
    -Spilled perfume
    -Little Moments
    -Not your girl
    -Peaceful
    -I'll always love you

    Thank you very much

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    [It's people like him who are doing the downrating, Lmao.]

    ^^^ And thank you! I really appreicate that statement, Sarah.
    and also thanks for the comments. I appreciate it. =]

    And same to you, Jessy!

    I'll get to this either later today or tomorrow; I might be shopping today.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    The Messenger {Trijan Refrain}
    Me, I'm Not {Trijan Refrain}
    Let Fear Sleep {ZaniLa Rhyme}
    Babylon {Ode}
    Orgy of Critics {Kryielle Sonnet}
    You Make My Heart Itch [With Regret] {Parquette}
    Midnight Massacre
    Ruby Red Rains {Haiku}
    A Mask {Sedoka}
    So Misleading {Haiku}
    La, La, Lie {Triquatrain}

    ^^^^
    Those are some of the poems. The worst ones, that is. =/ There are 11. If you do all 11 [vote AND comment] I'll do 25 of yours. 25! That's a lot. And notice most of mine are really short. Promise! =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • ShootingStar179
    18 years ago

    All right, I'm off to do all 11! Lol call me brave and bored! You've already read some of my poems, comment those that you haven't. Thanks!

    Alright, I lied. I only got through 4. Please do any that catch your attention in my poetry. :)

  • Independence Forever
    18 years ago

    You have ahigher rating than most.

    bless God you get the rating you earn.

    my poems may not be as good but i made a friendship with many people on this sight who ask me repeatedly to comment on their stuff or proffread for them certain things.

    all because they love how i talk and how i act.

  • ShootingStar179
    18 years ago

    Lol David, you can comment me. I don't know you ;)

  • Independence Forever
    18 years ago

    I'll get right on it

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Lmao.

    You are welcome for both. Just stating the truth.

    Ok, have fun shopping.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Hello, beauties.
    So, here's the thing.

    I haven't done these because I've been shopping. [Which I never do, so yay!]

    But. I said I can't do love and friendship and you guys have given me some. I'll do your comments as soon as you take them out. =/ Sorry I can't do them; it's the computers [more like the sites'] fault!

    Thanks. And sorry for the incovience. [Bad spelling, but, eh, it's late.]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Just do:
    Dig my grave [Parquette].
    Don't worry about any others.
    Its fine.
    Thank you.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    ^^^
    Are you sure? I love commenting on poetry. =] You're welcome to leave more, I just can't do love and friendship. I'm really sorry for the incovience. =/

    I'll do them now.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Melpomene
    18 years ago

    Hey Sheena, I'm very bored atm so i'm off to read the 11 you dont have to do 25 of mine though hun and i dont have that many anyways lol. But i just started back on this site again because my other account was suspended so im looking for some honest comments on my poems and i know your the best person to give me then. Your poems are a pleasure to read and as for darwin lol his poems to tell you the truth are quite uhmm bad (I'm expecting alot of downvotes on my poems now lol) But its always a pleasure to read yours. So im off to do them now. I'll leave you a few titles when i'm done. :)

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    Sarah--
    I did your one poem. I don't want you to get mad, understand it's two am here and I had nothing to do. I was being honest, and by the way, you made me realize that I did the Parquette wrong AGAIN. Argh! But shh. I'll fix it. ;]

    Mel--
    That's awesome. I'll do what I can tonight and I WILL give honest critic. What else would a poetry site be for? =] I'll get on them now... and thank you. =]
    Ahhh. I was going to be the good girl and do all your poems, but you have a lot.
    So, I'd LOVE you if you left some titles [as many as you want, it's only fair, I promised!] and I'll get to them ASAP. Promise. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    Thanks for the comment Sheena.
    And I appreciate that you were honest and such.
    I'll try and fix it.
    That was my first Parquette I've written.
    Thank you again.

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    18 years ago

    ^^^
    I repeat [and can't repeat enough] how hard Parquette's seem to be. I've tried three times and STILL didn't do it right. I either forget syllables or don't do this... ECK. [[Stabs the style.]] Mark me, I WILL write one that is a true Parquette before I die. =]

    And, you're welcome. Thank YOU for taking it like a true poet. =]

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

  • Melpomene
    18 years ago

    Ok Sheena i did your poems. Hopefully i didnt bore you with my long comments lol And thankyou alot for getting to my work take your time though :)

    Could you please do the following
    -The river styx {Dark prince and his bride}
    -The black rose {Reversed Etheree}
    -Perfect pain {Quatern}
    -A poem on this wrist
    -My haunting childhood memory
    -The evil vride and groom {double etheree}
    -The love thorn
    -Porcelain tears.

    I really hope that is not to much to ask of you if it is please just say so.

    But thankyou alot it is really appreciated.~mel

  • Infected with His Deadly Love
    18 years ago

    It took me awhile to write it in the first place.
    You will write one eventually.
    I'll have to try and write another one and see if I can get that one right.

    It would be immature of me to be like 'I hate you know, blah blah blah'

    And I'd rather people tell me so I can fix it.