Dearest Heart

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Ok, I have written a series of 4 poems so far, there may be more soon, anyway, if you could r/r/c them, I would love it. I will return the favor always and maybe double, depending on if you leave me a one liner or if you actually give me a meaningful comment. Thank you!!!

    .:Danielle:.

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    THEY ARE AWESOME POEMS, PEOPLE.

    GO, NOW, READ THEM!

    <3

    tre cute.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Lmao, thank you dear!! Also, I sent you a PM ^

    .:Danielle:.

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Come on guys.. they aren't awful!!

    .:Danielle:.

  • Tara Kay
    18 years ago

    Well, i read all 5 of them and was glad to see a 5th one submitted. I commented on them all and please could you do some of mine!
    love Tara-Kay

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Any specific ones you wanted me to do??

    .:Danielle:.

  • ImNotPerfect20
    18 years ago

    I commented on all 5 of them.. can you please do the 5 in my featured section.. thanks!

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    ImNotPerfect your done, Tara-Kay, I'll have to finish the rest of yours later, sorry!

    .:Danielle:.

  • aDORKable x3
    18 years ago

    Hey babe! Just letting you know that I read them! =] But you already knew that! :P

    Love ya oodles!

    <3

  • .K.i.T.t.Y.
    18 years ago

    Oh, a fifth one. I'm off to read it now!

  • Anonymous Angel
    18 years ago

    Hey,
    I read all 5 of your poems, did comments and rated them too, I soo love them XD

    if you want to you could do 5 of my latest poems and please if you do, rate them too.
    kisses stephanie

  • Mezmeryz
    18 years ago

    Hey, i read all 5 in the series andi got to say, they are outstanding! never seen anything like it...so very unique..great work, keep it up!
    can u plz do:

    --an illicit child
    --didn't even look back
    --life [butterfly oddquain]
    --somewhere within you
    --under the rainbow

    thanks!!! nuf luv xx

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Ok, I'll get on those right away, and there is 6th one now! lol

    .:Danielle:.

  • Vanessa
    18 years ago

    That was really great. I read all the ones you had posted, the concept was diffrent, and the emtion was deep. Please read any of my latest, if you only have time to read one please read
    *Uncondtional Love despite the Imperfections

  • George
    18 years ago

    Read and reviewed all six...wow! Intense and emotional, and amazing! If you could review some of my stuff I'd appreciate it...if nothing else could you do
    "Dreams of You..."
    "Dreams in Dark"
    "The Final Task"

  • Debbie
    18 years ago

    I'll check it out too. :)

  • Debbie
    18 years ago

    Good Heavens! It was utterly brilliant! =O Haha. I've read and reviewed every part of the series. :) Wonderful work, I dare say.

    Could you r/r/c any six pieces of my featured poems? If you'll review 12 pieces of mine, since I didn't left you one-liners, then please do all ten of my featured poems + 2 of your pick from my latest pieces.

    Thank you very much! ^__^

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Ok, I will get on top of those right away. Thank you all so much for reading them!! It means a lot. Ok, now I know someone mentioned a couple of times that captalizing Him and Her wasn't necessary, but that is their names, and therefore should be captalized. Also the Her is the person who's mind and heart are fighting. She is the person who incases the heart and mind and all the confusion of the heartbreak. Ok, hopefully that cleared that up!! <3

    Thanks!!

    .:Danielle:.

  • Startle Me
    18 years ago

    I'm sorry, dear.
    But I've only got time for one.
    I'm going to the doctor pretty soon.
    Will you do my
    The Greed of Lust and Love
    Please and thank you :P

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Ok, sorry due to lack of time and piling up of school work, I'm only going to be able to get to the titles that you gave me. If you just asked for recent/featured poems I will do them, but from now on could you leave titles?? Thank you!!!

    I have gotten to everyone except Marian, who I will have to finish up later, sorry dear!!! <3

    .:Danielle:.

  • ~*SugarCube*~
    18 years ago

    Hey, i rated and commented on 4 of your poems.
    could you r/r/c on
    1. Unconditional love
    2. Lurking around every corner
    3. April 16th,2007
    4. everyday

    please & thank you =]

  • Debbie
    18 years ago

    Thank you, Danielle. Don't worry, I can wait. =]

  • xPerfect Chaosx
    18 years ago

    Ok, look, I'm really sorry I'm late getting on these, I've got a lot of other stuff piling up right now!! T_T I'll get to them ASAP! I promise!!

    .:Danielle:.