I NEED YOUR HELP

  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Please go to:

    http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12372968

    And rate my poem there a few people have visted it but i'm a bit desperate right now.

    In return i'll read any three of your poems as well as vote and comment on them.
    so please anything will help.

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  • TwiztidJuggalette
    18 years ago

    Done...You did a great job on that one..I enjoyed reading it... I voted a 9...

    Can you please do:
    o1-What Her Father Has Done (Triolet)
    o2-Brody (Acrostic)
    o3-My Way Of Life

    Please And Thank You!!

    P.S. Can You Please Vote Also...

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  • Lonely Little Dreamer
    18 years ago

    Really good poem..i liked the symbolism that you used..i voted 8/10..great job

    can you please do:

    Facets of Rain
    Unattainable Love
    and another of your choosing

    Thanks!

    Amie

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Trying to hold on great poems
    a bit sad but i loved them anyway.

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Hey TwiztidJuggalette

    impressive poems need a bit of work but nice start.

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Lonely Little Dreamer

    Great poems you definatly do have a style all of your own. Again great job.

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Anybody else
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    Anyone at all?

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Plaese i really need yiur help so if it is not to much to ask please anything will help.

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  • TwiztidJuggalette
    18 years ago

    Hey! Thanks for the advice...

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  • Sweet Fragility
    18 years ago

    Enjoyed the symbolism. Wish i could write like this. Gave it 9/10.

    Can you please do:

    ~ All My Heart
    ~ If I'm Not in Love
    ~ Hawksong

    Thanks a lot!

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Sweet Fragility great poems
    Hawksong was my fav. I think that i'll
    read that book of yours it sounds interesting

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  • Wallace
    18 years ago

    I'm on it. Please do.

    -Maiden of the sky breeze
    -Lover's Paradise
    -Thy gift of love

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Nice poems Wallace
    Keep up the good work

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Anybody else out there?

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  • Cella Bella
    18 years ago

    I voted a 10 :]

    could you do,

    -A Nightmare's Song
    -Waiting For Better Days [Villanelle]
    -Wishing Star [Triquatrain]

    Thanks

    marcella

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  • Anonymous Angel
    18 years ago

    I liked it, I voted 8/10 =)

    could you do three of my latest poems, I would really appreciate it.

    kisses stephanie

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  • Princess of snow
    18 years ago

    Done!! I gave it a 8/10!!
    Nice piece. I hope you
    continue writing.
    Please read/rate/comment my poems called:

    My Sorrow
    Wintry Snow

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  • Nuh
    18 years ago

    HEYYYYYY everyone XD
    well can some one please read mine &vote..
    and ill read everyones in here right now lolz

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  • lish
    18 years ago

    Done :) nice poem btw

    can you please comment
    - my name is hakim jamil
    -mother is what your not
    and
    -remember us

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  • isabel
    18 years ago

    Done... it's a really good poem... i rated 10...=D
    if you get to me, please comment any three of mine that don't have many comments, please...

    thanks =)

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  • Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum
    18 years ago

    I gave you a 10, I really liked it :)

    Could you please do me 'Guardian Angel' 'Birth of a Shadow' and any other you wish please?

    Thanks :)

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  • MaSkEdSoUl
    18 years ago

    I really liked it, its a for sure 10 well done on it.

    Can you please do:

    Meaning Of Words
    Life And The What If's
    And
    I Am Human

    Please and thank you!!

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Cella Bella
    nice poems

    Sorry it took so long

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Hey Anonymous Angel
    Poems were good

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Snow Princess
    since you only had 2 poems i did both of them
    and your quote.
    Keep up the good work.

    and make some more poems

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Nuh
    Nice poems keep up the good work
    and fix those spelling errors

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Hey Lish
    cute picture
    great poems
    nice job

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Doing what?

    by the way
    Isabel great expresion in your poems
    your finished

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Dave nice poems your done

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    SiMpLy UnKnOwN
    nice poems and keep up the good work

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Anybody else
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    is anyone out there at all?

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Confused?

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Come on i know someone is out there

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    HELLO HELLo HELlo HEllo Hello hello

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Anybody here?

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  • amoxi
    18 years ago

    I gave it a 9 it was wonderful
    can you please do *memories*
    thanks

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Hey amoxi good poem nice work.

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  • Spirit
    18 years ago

    Whose next?

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