Happy love contest

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    RESULTS AT BOTTOM.

  • BrixGoesxRawr
    16 years ago

    Don't Forget You're Mine [You promised me forever]

    by Bri [x]

    That first kiss; true loves first kiss
    Oh baby, it told me you were the one
    And no -- I'll never let go of you
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    Tightening of the chest, never loved like this
    Baby, don't pour down rain on yourself
    Because you bring the sunshine right into my life
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    I promise I'll give you the best of me
    I'll give you all of me, every part of me
    I won't hold anything back from you
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    Black and white turns to vivid color
    You lift me up, oh so very high
    You're my drug && I'm addicted to your words
    Don't forget your mine [you promised me forever]

    If you ever turned away and walked out that door --
    Weather forecast: Calls for cloudy skies && foggy eyes
    Just hold me in your arms, and we can forget about everything
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    You got me going crazy, I can't put it all in to words
    Take my heart baby -- hold it gently in your hands
    Who needs to sleep? When your dreams have come true.
    Don't forget you're mine [you promised me forever]

    Fact: I need you because I love you
    Just don't forget you're mine

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    You Are My Life

    Everyday when I wake up,
    I see you sleeping beside me.
    You look so peaceful,
    That I don't wish to disturb you.

    You're the person that holds my heart,
    And no one can take that away.
    You're the man that makes me feel loved,
    In the special ways you do.

    You're always on my mind,
    Throughtout the night and day.
    Whenever I think you,
    Everything just feels so right.

    There has always been something,
    Deep inside of you,
    Something that I thought,
    That I would never find.

    I promise to be there for you,
    In the good times and bad times.
    You'll always have my love,
    You'll never be alone again.

    .:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
    .:Jan. 3, 2008:.

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    When is the due date?

  • FridusBlueheaven
    16 years ago

    Title : When I Saw You
    Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

    When I saw the cloud through the blue sky
    I wish that I could be there and flying high
    Call the wind breeze, call the sun through day
    And wish that I could have more time to stay

    When I saw the moon through middle of night
    I saw the shining light, it's beautifully bright
    But I believe it won't shine as bright as you
    Dear, you should believe that it's really true

    When I saw the sun, I could feel the warmth
    Bring me higher, wish it won't ever find an end
    But it's you, you're my only lucky charm
    And it's always be an honor that I'm your man

    When I saw the world, I saw million miracles
    Well I can see it well without any spectacles
    But you know that everything inside of you
    Can do more than million miracles can do

    When I saw you, I don't want to see anything else
    I'll always believe that you're my fate, you're my best
    More than the light can shine, you're always on my heart
    You'll always be my greatest thing, right from the start

    2008 Blueheaven Entertainment (c)

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    The closing date is up in the air as i don't have access to a computer much at the moment. i'm hoping to close this in around a week or so.

  • Romancing the Darker Side
    16 years ago

    Yes

    My friends asked around
    We decided we knew you
    I'd seen you once or twice
    And I'm certainly see-through

    But you met a friend
    Of a friend of mine,
    And on that day in August,
    My world began to shine

    You were one of us then
    You sat at our table
    Where we are ourselves
    And no one gets a label

    Best friends we became
    (Seems that you had two)
    I thought you loved my friend
    But I had no clue

    A dear friend of mine
    Told of my feelings for you
    Turns out I got lucky:
    You had them too

    I asked you then,
    If what you had said was true
    You said, "Yes, of couse,
    my feelings are for you"

  • Teria
    16 years ago

    Turns My World Around.

    His hands, they make me shudder.
    He's completely irresistible,
    with every single flaw.

    His jaws match mine,
    as we begin to intertwine,
    forgetting all the world.

    His eyes stare at me,
    with so much innocence-
    burning my insides.

    His smile stirs me up,
    though I've never seen it,
    it's what gets me through.

    His sadness brings me down,
    but the butterflies I get,
    makes my world turn around.

    And, cliche words can't match him -
    he's the definition of my heart,
    bearing feelings I've never felt . . .

    Churning inside me is
    his soul within mine.
    Living forever, making me shine

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    Remember, I Love You

    I never really knew you,
    You were just another friend.
    But when I got to know you,
    I let my heart unbend.

    I couldn't help past memories,
    That would only make me cry.
    I had to forget my first love,
    And give love another try.

    So I've fallen in love with you,
    And never let you go.
    I love you more than anyone,
    I just had to let you know.

    And if you ever wonder why,
    I don't know what I'll say.
    But I'll never stop loving you,
    Each and every day.

    My feelings for you will never change,
    Just know my feelings are true.
    But just remember one thing,
    I love you!

    .:CiNdY LoPeZ:.
    .:Jan. 5, 2008:.

  • Gem
    16 years ago

    Xx Diamond In The Sand xX

    Finding love in this lonely world
    Was like finding a needle in a haystack
    Discovering a diamond in the sand
    Nailing jelly to a tree
    Impossible...
    Or so it seemed...

    Something that just wasn't worth the effort
    The countless disappointments
    The tears...
    The hurt...
    Weighing down the fragile heart
    When something that felt like love
    Turned out to be a sham
    A red herring

    Love was something that was only found in the movies
    In books
    In the imagination...
    A sort of pipe dream

    But even pipe dreams can become a reality
    Love can find you when you least expect it
    When you cease looking
    It springs out of nowhere
    Like a long lost friend
    A best friend
    A lover

    You find that needle in the haystack
    And when you do, you realise it's something special
    The real thing
    Something worth waiting for

    I found my diamond in the sand
    And it's the most valuable diamond i could ever hope to own
    It's you

    *Gem*
    Copyright©GemmaStott2007

  • jLegendc
    16 years ago

    Angel

    And as I look into the skies,
    I see an angel in disguise,
    She looked straight at me
    With those beautiful eyes.
    Just by that split second,
    She removed my demise,
    Gave me hope to realize
    That there's still a meaning
    For the life I fantasize...

    And as she looked
    At me deep inside,
    She saw a name printed,
    There are letters that collide.
    It forms a word that will,
    Always be by my side
    I'll protect it with,
    All of my might
    Even if it costs my life...

    And as she looked
    Into my mind,
    She saw an image
    That can't be unbind.
    It's as if my mind,
    Is always on a rewind,
    There's no other image
    She'll ever find...

    And as she touched
    My hand & pull me near,
    I confessed my love
    Without any fear.
    The world became so clear,
    And as I put her hand
    On my chest --
    I asked her...
    "Can you hear my heart beat?"
    It is saying that I'll love you
    With every beat of it!!!!!"

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    16 years ago

    Love: Plainly Perfect

    Their Lesbian Love Song

    Their love does not know gender,
    Religion, age, or race.
    Their love knows opportunity,
    Motive, time, and place.

    Ember was a loner,
    A General Unknown.
    A potential Cinderella,
    The trait that wasn't shown.

    Harlem was an outcast,
    Your average rebel teen.
    Not exactly popular,
    But never envy green.

    They all avoided Ember
    Who ignored them in return.
    But her longing for belonging
    Just made her stomach churn.

    They idolized dear Harlem,
    But secretly, of course,
    Never to admit
    Rebellion's tempting force.

    Ember was a freshman,
    Harlem's second junior year,
    Em's life planned to the minute,
    As Harlem played by ear.

    Both of them were broken,
    For Em it was the lies,
    For Harlem it was Daddy and
    Abusive, cheating guys.

    Ember's first encounter,
    Her first time girl-on-girl,
    Happened in the second grade
    And changed her whole damn world.

    Harlem never tried it,
    But it wasnâ??t out of range.
    Since boys were never pleasing,
    It was time to make a change.

    Harlem first saw Ember
    As she ate alone at lunch.
    Harlem pegged her lesbian,
    But thought, "It's just a hunch."

    Then Ember noticed Harlem,
    And bore the shiest smile.
    Harlem felt a sudden warmth
    She had not felt in quite a while.

    Harlem shuffled over,
    And offered out her hand:
    "I'm Harlem, Harley, are you new?"
    Ember took a stand.

    "I'm Ember, short for Emberly,
    And yes, I'm pretty new.
    I should still be in 8th but
    I'm a freshman. What are you?"

    "I'm a junior for the second time,
    Smart, but just don't care.
    I'd rather just be living life,
    Writing books somewhere."

    "Wait! You're Harlem Peterson?
    The poet from the news?
    The girl who wrote the anecdote
    Called 'Hands Inside My Shoes'?"

    Harlem laughed and then replied,
    "That's me, I must confess,
    And while that story's popular,
    My poems are my best."

    "Oh. All I write are rhythms,
    For drums and for guitar.
    The words donâ??t match the rhythm, but,
    Emotion's never far."

    With a silent small suggestion,
    They smiled and they beamed,
    Musician meets the lyricist,
    Simply meant to be.

    They exchanged their seven digits,
    Texted, talked for days,
    In a week they saw each other
    In two distinctive ways.

    Harlem thought of friendship,
    But somehow wanted more.
    Confusion struck her deeply,
    Wonders made her sore.

    Ember dreamed of "Girlfriends,"
    But a little scared to ask.
    For turning straight girls lesbian,
    It's not a simple task.

    A mere week or two later,
    Looking in the other's eye,
    They impulsively embraced,
    And shared a kiss goodbye.

    The impulse was a blessing,
    And neither could deny,
    As they continued kissing,
    It felt nothing shy of right.

    It turned a major lip-lock,
    But started just a peck.
    Harlem thought about reactions,
    'Till Ember kissed her neck.

    Ember leaned in closer,
    And spoke in Harlem's ear,
    "I know that this is new to you,
    But baby, do not fear."

    Harlem took her hand and
    Placed it on dear Ember's neck.
    She pulled her face in closer,
    Her heart a nervous wreck.

    They kissed again with passion,
    Love, not teenage lust.
    And though some say they broke the rules,
    They knew their motive's just.

    Students stopped and stared in awe,
    The girls continued on.
    For neither one had felt this right
    On oh so very long.

    Finally they broke away,
    And Ember shyly grinned.
    Harlem looked in Ember's eyes,
    Not wanting this to end.

    They hugged goodbye and strode away,
    Their heads held proud and tall.
    And for once, neither cared about
    The whispers in the hall.

    Their love does not know gender,
    Religion, age, or race.
    Their love nows oppotunity,
    Perfection, motive, grace.

  • ctmskm
    16 years ago

    A little long.. but not as extensive as the one above. :)
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    Title: My attemps in speaking to her heart
    by CTMSKM

    This is for you my dear,
    So I may try and speak to your heart,
    Some words that proved I loved you,
    Even from the start.

    The day that your soul in-fixed my gaze,
    I could not look away,
    Your presence alone,
    Enough to make me sway.

    You entered through my eyes,
    And into my heart you came,
    Exuding all eternal love,
    To which never will I be the same.

    We witnessed such a spark,
    Soon led to be a fire,
    Just to be alone with you,
    Our hearts burning with desire.

    You learned to love my heart,
    I learned to love yours first, :)
    What were we to do?
    With such a new love to disperse

    First unspoken words "I love you,"
    Will surely soon be said,
    Because I love you, - I love you baby,
    kept running through my head.

    Exquisite sensations,
    Perpetual bliss,
    Our moments in time,
    Overwhelming happiness.

    I love the way you look at me,
    When you think that I can't see,
    Believe me when I say this,
    "To my heart, you are my key."

    The broken locks were an opening,
    For you inside my head,
    I tried my best to be guarded,
    But With you I'm an open book instead.

    You're the only girl,
    That I could forever hold,
    I hope our love is never-ending,
    If the truth be told.

    Time seems to go so fast when I'm with you
    So slow when your away,
    I cant wait for the next time I see you,
    I need you is what I'm here to say.

    Your appearance is perfection,
    Your soul, is divine,
    I can't believe I'm yours;
    I can't believe your mine.

    Feeling like I exist, all over again,
    As deep as the sky, under my skin,
    Waking me up to dreaming
    Reality in my eyes from within

    You fill me with such elation,
    You make me feel alive,
    Into auras of magic,
    Forever we will dive.

    My arms around you,
    An angel I tuck to bed,
    Your head on my shoulder,
    A place to rest your head.

    A feeling as though our souls are touching,
    Our hearts are holding hands,
    And in our eyes shared glances observe,
    What nobody else understands.

    I can't imagine life without you
    As funny as that seems
    Your face is in the sunrise
    Your laughter in my dreams.

    You make me smile till it hurts,
    And sometimes laugh till I cry,
    This could last forever sweetie,
    I'd do it until the day I die.

    I'll tell you that I love you,
    And that your always on my mind,
    But make sure my feet are on the ground for me,
    Because it feels like the worlds gravity has died.

    You always know just what to say,
    And exactly what to do,
    There is no doubt about it,
    I'm me when I'm with you.

    What we have is wonderful,
    But all is up to fate,
    To see what will become of us,
    I guess we'll have to wait.

    I hope we last forever,
    till the earth consumes us both,
    till I meet your soul face to face with mine
    All that changes is time.
    So here I give you evidence,
    That the words "forever and a day" will defend.
    Proving that death will not hold back my love.
    So before this night ends I just want to say
    Sarah I will love you forever and with you forever and a day I will stay.

    Thx and Goodluck.

  • Synh
    16 years ago

    Beautiful Sunday

    Blue skies watch as we lay below the trees
    The grass so cool beneath you and me

    A shimmering glint of sunlight swims through your eyes
    I couldn't help but stare into them as the day passed us by

    Your skin, sun kissed and dampened from the afternoon heat
    Left my lips feeling tender and my soul oh so sweet

    The tickle of your breath was enough to make me melt
    It was the most beautiful sensation I have ever felt

    That moment in time as our two souls became one
    Was when my soul praised God for what He had done

    And all these things I write because in fear, to you I cannot say
    But I promise, my love, never to forget that one beautiful Sunday

  • ctmskm
    16 years ago

    Great poems so far..

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Barbie, This is new as in I wrote it today for another contest. If that's not new enough please let me know and I'll remove it straight away =]

    Toxic Melody

    Drift throughout the atmosphere toxic melody will arise,
    As firefly's flicker entwined with blue beaded butterfly's,
    Stars shall crumble to dust as wind blows through air,
    Casting a light rain over meadows swaying in distance.

    "Kiss me" She whispers grasping his hand within hers,
    As practicals of what once was float from starless night,
    Rose petals travel within breeze, jewels of his affection,
    As silhouettes of a lullaby deteriorate through the mist.

    Droplets evaporate as sunrise forms before glowing eyes,
    "Morning comes round too quick" He hushes to her ear,
    Rainbows become faded within the view of cloudless sky,
    As toxic melody wisps a scent of Daisy's over grass fields.

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Not sure if you'd class this as happy love but to me it still is. Upto you in the end barbie judge lol.

    I'd Walk On Broken Glass To Be With You

    I'd move earth to hold you in a sweet embrace...

    My heart strings play a melody like elegant cords to violin,
    It's sweet I shall admit, Though sorrow does play within tune,
    I miss you like the scent of summer distant while in winter,
    Yet I yearn for you in opposite all the way throughout June.

    I'd stop lightening to view the glow in your eyes...

    My bones hold an ache such as one from a seasonal cold,
    The chill up an old spine gets deeper with your very thought,
    The only warmth I've come to feel is the one from burning fire,
    Yet even that feels dim, Within snow my body becomes caught.

    I'd battle thunder to hear the beauty of your voice...

    Autumns leave drift calmly, What beauty orange seems to be,
    Entwined with brown from your eye color how I hold on dearly,
    "Come back to me" I'll whisper into a breeze of our memory's,
    Though I know you'll be home soon, know I love you sincerely.

    I'd walk through fire to kiss those lips once again...

    ....And I know you'd do the same for me..

  • Miu
    16 years ago

    Everything starts with a falling star.

    "There, there is a shooting star! "
    While he is shouting adrenaline is rushing through his heart.
    "Where, where is the shooting star?"
    Girl asking, with excitement glancing from her eyes.

    "Oh, there! I see it! There it is!"
    With happy voice at the boy she looked
    And he covered softly her eyes with hands palms
    "Now make a wish!" gently he said, smiling with his heart on summer blaze.

    She cutely giggles and holds her eyes closed tight
    He smiles looking at her not letting her out of sight.
    And bending down, he softly kisses her cheek.
    Both of them softly blushing, feeling heath inside.

    Girl with her big blue eyes looking at the boy,
    "What was that?" asking in a shivering voice.
    "A kiss" answers boy and looks shyly down.
    For a moment, they both are making no sound.

    Her sweetie rose blush
    And she leans over to her crush,
    Touching softly his lips with hers,
    "A kiss" she says and at each other they stare.

    And they smile to tears,
    Shaking from the fear.
    And they smile,
    Forever, and every single moment, till the day they die.

  • Jenni Marie
    16 years ago

    First of, i apologize for the delay in judging. I've been busy ^^ anyway. 1st place, 8 comments: Bri-don't forget your mine, you promised me forever. 2nd place, 7 comments: ashes of a black rose, love plainly perfect. 3rd place, 6 comments: Mel, i'd walk on broken glass to be with you. 4th place, 5 comments: Jess, one day i promise. remaining participants will each recieve two comments. please pm me the titles you want doing. but please remember to give me time..I'm not on here 24/7 :)

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Thanks Jenni! Congrats to all.

  • ctmskm
    16 years ago

    Great job everyone. they were all good.

    and for the comments.. any two you'd like. thx
    ctmskm

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    16 years ago

    WOOT! i never thought i'd win this! thanks so much! if you could comment on my five poems in the "Letters to Lovers" series and any other two you findd interesting, that would be AMAZING.

    thanks again!!!