Does your poems or quotes need some lovin?

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    Just leave the titles! & i'll go r.r.c them :)

    If you want you can read mine too..i only have 4 for now. :) But you dont have to.

    mahalo! :D

    --i'll rrc them as soon as possible. i might be a little busy right now! BUT i'll get them done fo sho! :)

  • EssenceOfLace
    17 years ago

    Ha, you have already commented on alot of my poems.

    but i would really appreciate it if you would with more/ on some you havent.

    you dont have to comment if you dont want to. just read and rate..

    thank you so much!

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    XforgottenloveX
    --i could really relate to "My Perfect Dream" & "Over And Over Again" was very sad, and if this is whats happening to you, never be someones 2nd best! you want a man who'll treat you like his #1 girl! So stay strong...& know that sometimes relationships are like broken class, its better to leave the pieces on the floor then try to hurt yourself by putting it back together!

    NightmareChild
    --LOVE THE "save me" series! its sooo interesting & exciting..but sad too!

    Keep it up both of you!! :)
    & mahalo for your feedbacks!

  • A l y s s a
    17 years ago

    I'd love it if you could give me some feedback on 'Broken Toy'. I'd be more than happy to return the favour.

    Thanks!!

    Ally. x

  • xxTaegan Emilyxx
    17 years ago

    Could u do mine?ill leave how many u want to do up to you. What ever ones u want to. i never leave titles. I think it should be up to the reader!
    xx
    Taegan Emily
    ps im doing urs now =D

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Please check out 'Carnival glass of tears" and " Black Fusion" if you have time... I'll surely return the favor :)

  • Krista
    17 years ago

    If you could r/r/c on my poems The Night and My Short-Lived Life, that would be grand. Thanks. I will gladly r/r/c your poetry too. Check out my quotes. I only have 4, and I feel that they moved me when I wrote them. Thanks.

  • ABake
    17 years ago

    If you don't mind doing any of my most recent please and thank you :]]

  • The Pessimistic Peabody
    17 years ago

    Thanks...I'd appreciate if you'd check out
    Grounded
    and
    Goats nibble, crayons scribble, I'm insane

  • Greg Beam
    17 years ago

    Hey can u please do "Wait For You" and if you want it would be nice if u did my other ones too.

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Any of my Featured poems would be great.

    Thanks in advance, Joe

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    "Closure"

    thanks :]

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    OK! :)...im sorry it took so long, just been busy lately. but i did get to all of yours! :)
    thank you to those who did r.r.c on my poems! :)

    mahalo again!

    =-The Hardest Thing In Life Is To Know Which Bridges To Cross And Which To Burn!-=

  • crystaljean88
    17 years ago

    Hey plz r/r/c ne of my poems plzz..

    ur choice..
    imma read urs now.. thanks

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    Good writes hun!! I wish you all the best of luck, & remember to stay strong, & live your life! Dont let anyone tell you different!!! If you stay focused in life, & to be determined in what you truelly want, im sure you'll get it! Just keep hope & faith!! :)
    Take care hun! :)

  • Melpomene
    17 years ago

    Any of my poems would be greatly appreciated =]

    I'll return the favour.

    Thanks ~Mel

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    Wow, you write so beautifully! so deep in details & emotion!! LOVE IT! ..i did two poems & quotes!! :) keep it up hun!! :)

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    Anyone else want their poems//quotes read?

  • XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX
    17 years ago

    Ok do suicide note. btw ur soooo nice!! and if u like quotes, u'll most likely love mine... ne way thanks!!!

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    -wow...very interesting poems you got their adam.

    -suicide note was very simple & good, yet sad & spooky! hehe

    keep it up you guys! :)

  • Hawaiizang3l
    17 years ago

    HEY GUYS!!
    i wrote a couple new poems!! :) ...just letting you guys know! ((i awalys return the favors!! :] ))

    mahalo!