I love this poem i cant believe you even though twice about adding it...by the way do you read romance novels because that sounded like a definet excerpt ((sp?)) ...and i am a biiiig fan of romance novels. *bows down* u are the awesomest for writing this and the passion was so tangible...*Sigh* its just perfect.

If there was a higher score then 5 you'd get it ^_^

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It was no problem 2 read the whole thing because in the end it was worth it cuz it was very good, i give it a perfect 5/5

It was a great poem, I like the imagery you have created in this wonderful poem - it kept my attention from start to end, well done. It flowed nicely, You have a good vocab.

5/5 keep up the good work!

OMG this is superb superb. I wish I am married. you have described everything so well, Im so impressed dear. I also like this kinda poems it makes some sensations within me ;-). Your beloved must be very lucky :)

tc 5/5 all the way
Fsams

Wow, this was greatly written a very special poem, that was done with a great style and vocab usage. you are very talente dear, keep it up

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

Top work - very imaginative!

Very well written, great poem! I did infact read the whole thing, lol... but it was definatly worth reading! You are very talented... 5/5!

Excellent, very well written and appealing, makes you feel like your there{kinda perverd saying it like that} very nice flow

If you rly wrote this from imagination and not experience that was rly good and you have a great mind.thats comendable.your a good writer!

If you rly wrote this from imagination and not experience that was rly good and you have a great mind.thats comendable.your a good writer!

This was so elegant, and so passionate. It was filled with sensation and love. I suggest maybe you should theme it explicit, just so it doesn't get deleted by P&Q. But besides that, the flow was amazing, the wording was amazing and went right with the poem. Excellent job!

5/5

Long but excellent 5/5 that was a wonderful poem i like how you expressed each and every feeling pleases feel free to take a peek at mine pms

Long but excellent 5/5 that was a wonderful poem i like how you expressed each and every feeling pleases feel free to take a peek at mine pms

Wow this is an excellent poem this is not too long, it has a great usage of vocabulary i love the flow and the words you use , i love how you combine the sentences and nothing can add GREAT excemptional this is AMAZING Elaine great job keep it up 5/5

Gene Ross

I cant usually keep on reading if its a long poem, but you really kept my attention throughout the whole thing! i thought your wording and vocab was amazing... so much imagery.
you're an amazing writer, in no way did this earn less than a 5/5
great job!

~Sandra

This poem was much better then the last. To me it was very long yet it didn't bore me what so ever. I think you work better writing on your own more then in a collab. I liked your word choice it was strong and effective. The title was different I had no idea what this piece was going to be about so it had me interested. Overall a good poem. Well done ~mel

Very nicely done. The descriptions were clear yet wasn't overdone. Very beautiful, erotic poem.

Wow.. very strong poem.. i like this one very much.. keep up the good work. i rate this a 5

My god Elaine... this poem was truly amazing, I'm still lost at words! You really used your imagination with this one.. hehe, kind of felt like I was apart of the poem =) It was really that capturing! It was neat, organized, amazing, well-written, beautiful, and I just couldn't look away from it until I was done reading.. hehe =) It was so good I had to read it again! Your words were so strong and I loved the way you used them.. great job sweetie! You better keep up the good work girl, I'm sure Jake is proud of you for creating such beautiful poetry!!

<3 Ya!! 5/5

~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~

Unlike most of the tasteless explicit poems I have read, this is a poem, not a mere pornographic description. I thought it was so beautifully discriptive and the length was no problem. I loved it. Very, very, well done.
Kat-x-