Submission date : 2005-08-16
Melissa S. Masucci ( F P C D )
Ahahaha I love the twist ending that really took me off guard.
I'll have to admit, I always like your stuff but I definitely think this isn't one of your better poems. Still quite good, but you've done better :)
Shawna ( C )
Good job. Funny.
*Danielle* ( C D )
xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D )
That's so... weird. I'm not sure if it belongs in this category I don't know where it belongs.. I just don't know. It's not your best by far.