Where Did You Go?

by Darien

Where Did You Go?

I was dreaming about you,
when nightmares made me cry.
Haunted by the thought of you,
leaving me for another guy.

I woke up to find you gone,
panicked I was I cried out.
'Baby I love you, come back!'
The walls repeated as I shout.

My heart slumped into my gut,
as the butterflies inside arose.
I trembled from the cold,
as my heart had froze.

I looked at our picture,
the one we took at grad.
Then I remembered,
you're out with your dad.


Submission date : 2005-08-16

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Melissa S. Masucci ( F P C D ) at 2006-07-07

Ahahaha I love the twist ending that really took me off guard.

I'll have to admit, I always like your stuff but I definitely think this isn't one of your better poems. Still quite good, but you've done better :)

Shawna ( C ) at 2006-07-10

Good job. Funny.

*Danielle* ( C D ) at 2006-07-11

Haha cute!

cecilia at 2006-07-16

That cool.

xDarkSuicidex ( F P C D ) at 2006-08-16

That's so... weird. I'm not sure if it belongs in this category I don't know where it belongs.. I just don't know. It's not your best by far.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

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