Submission date : 2011-04-30
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
Amen. Seriously. I can connect to every last emotion in this piece. I can definitely feel that anger in your voice, it truly comes through. It takes a lot to move forward and not allow someone to walk all over you and 'conquer' you, but sometimes it's impossible to even bare anymore. I just loved what you expressed here, it seemed like a vent more than a poem, but some parts were poetic and I think that gave the poem a nice balance. I love when I can connect to poems, this one was one of those.