Submission date : 2005-09-15
Last edit : 2005-09-21
Steven Beesley ( F P C D )
Such a peaceful and serene poem. Very meaniful and deep, it has made me think alot about my past. Very inspirational piece of writing. Excellent work.
Shelby Bridges ( C )
Pieceful and beautiful,,,,I loved every
Kari Burkholder ( P )
Beautiful piece. Your writing is timeless...could it be we have an old soul on our hands? Keep writing...this is a wonderful talent...God bless
sarah ( F P C )
Its like a childs dream place mixed with youth feelings. i used to write about this old tree in my grandmothers yard.. i don't think i posted any of those poems. well she had that old tree cut down :[ and out of all the trees in my yard only the one in my grandmas yard was worth expressing. great descriptions!
lisa marie ( F P C D )
This poem had really good imagery. a very calm and pretty piece. well done my friend.