Submission date : 2007-03-06
Melpomene ( F P C D )
When I saw you had some haiku's posted to your account I was intrigued! I know you say you you're shocking at them but I remembered the string Haiku challenge I gave on the Salvador Dali painting and you blew me out of the water so I wanted to see what else you could come up with, plus I love cherry blossoms, such beautiful trees.
I really loved that you used the word 'ephemeral' such a beautiful word and such a perfect one when depicting any flower/plant. It's true they don't last long but when they do they're stunning.
Also perfect syllable count! I'm off to check out these other two Cherry Blossom Haiku's you've got posted.