Seasons of Equal Beauty (Diamante)

by Lu

__________ Spring __________
_____ precious, beautiful _____
__blooming, growing, breathing __
fragrant, flowers, spectacular, leaves
__ dying, cleansing, harvesting __
_____ vivacious, graceful _____
___________ Fall ___________


Though these seasons
may be opposite
one season breathes life
death slowly takes the
breath of the other
both are equal in beauty



DIAMANTE :

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

 

Submission date : 2007-03-24

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Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-24

Luanne
Nice job on your formed poetry :)

Really beautiful
Take Care Love Cindy

Poetess Call Me Glen-Duh! ( F C D ) at 2007-03-25

I miss writing these types of poems. I really loved this one. It gave me some warm fuzzy feeling. Hehe. ;p Truly, a beautiful write. Never stop writing! 5/5

` Liz

Twisted Heart ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-25

Bravo, dear friend. I have to admire and applaud anyone who does structure poetry. I never seem to get mine to turn out. Beautiful words.

Always,
Jeannie

Timothy r ( F P C D ) at 2007-03-25

Luanne, Luanne, such a great diamante. I liked doing this form so much, it`s great practice. I also loved your topic..yes..a fuzzy feeling indeed. Kudos, Timothy

*Gem* ( F P C D ) at 2007-04-13

You've put me in the mood to try another one of these.
Just waiting for the damn writers block to lift! lol
But seriously, this one is a prefect speciman of a diamante poem
Well done Lu
5/5
*Gem*