Comments : Vampire kisses

  • 9 years ago

    by kate

    Oh wow, thats a very interesting subject and poem you have here. I've honestly as long as i've been on this site, i have never read anything like this, which is very good, i really liked how you used a vampire instead of someone you know. I really liked this alot =] 5/5

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 9 years ago

    by monica

    I love it. i secretly want a vampire lover..haha twas a good poem. flowed nicely and i love the vocab.

  • 9 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well I don't really like Dark poems but I guess this was a fine written piece, this topic reminds me of the book 'Twilight' I haven't read that book but most of my 'female friends' talks about it. lol

    Anyway you have the potential to improve in your future poems so never stop writing :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem was very dark. I absolutely loved the mood you set for the poem. You are bringing light to a fantasy world that so many people love to hear about! Wonderfully written! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by your love is mine

    I love this poem its original and a good time killer

  • 9 years ago

    by JEFF

    Your a great writer, I really like reading your poetry. Hope to see more. 5/5

    P.s. thank you for your comments. :)

  • 9 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    I really loved this poem...it kind of put me in a dark place, but at the same time had a sensual vibe to it...5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Hmm...
    I liked this one okay, you're a great writer but the lack of punctuation and capitilization in the poem really takes away from it. It would have flowed better had it been better punctuated, but it really was beautiful anyway.
    4/5
    ~gabriella

  • 9 years ago

    by Brandon Lee

    I like vampires and I like your writing style.
    Very artistic and imaginative. 5*

  • 9 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Ooo very deep
    well done! great poem, nice work

    xXxSLxXx

  • 9 years ago

    by Katy

    Wow I love the last line!!! Wonderful job!

  • 9 years ago

    by khate

    Vampire kisses, im going to let you in
    Vampire teeth, was there suppose to pain
    Vampire breath, swimming within thy blood
    I love these insane senses, but mostly I love the mundane

    -what a line,.its great,love it,..^_^

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem at first start then I got mixed up in the end the mundane part I thought did not work well with the whole theme so I thought that wa the only let down other then that nice try Plot121

  • 9 years ago

    by SilentlyDyingInside

    MY NEW FAVORITE POEM!!! I love it! :)

  • 9 years ago

    by miracle

    Love this...its great....

  • 9 years ago

    by Happy With A New Start

    I like this one alot it's good!!!!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Wow this is rather unique and great at the same time... the come bite me parts annoyed me tho but it seemed necessary to be written.. i really love this!

  • 9 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    "You're saving me from my nightmare
    You're my knight of glowing night
    You're everything I ever could dream of
    I have always preferred black to white"
    This was the best part of your poem and this last phrase " I have always preferred black to white really gives it a perfect scary effect! Great Job. 5/5