Oh wow, thats a very interesting subject and poem you have here. I've honestly as long as i've been on this site, i have never read anything like this, which is very good, i really liked how you used a vampire instead of someone you know. I really liked this alot =] 5/5
keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.
I liked this one okay, you're a great writer but the lack of punctuation and capitilization in the poem really takes away from it. It would have flowed better had it been better punctuated, but it really was beautiful anyway.
This was a good poem at first start then I got mixed up in the end the mundane part I thought did not work well with the whole theme so I thought that wa the only let down other then that nice try Plot121
"You're saving me from my nightmare
You're my knight of glowing night
You're everything I ever could dream of
I have always preferred black to white"
This was the best part of your poem and this last phrase " I have always preferred black to white really gives it a perfect scary effect! Great Job. 5/5