The lonely place (please don't go)

by resisting reason   Feb 26, 2008


If i stay here
will you stay too
in the empty space
just me and you

the lonely place
inside my mind
just the two of us
for all time

since i was little
I've been alone
a stranger
in my home

until i found you
my only friend
please stay with me
till the end

if you stay
then so will i
until the day
we both die

if you leave
and leave me hear
then my heart will break
and I'll drown in tears

but before i go down
and sink into the abyss
I'll cry out
"hear me now, and remember this"

"i begged you not to go
but it was easy to tell
that you weren't going to stay
and save me from myself"

"now that you're gone
i have no reason to believe
that anything is worth
the effort to breathe"

so don't you see
that if you leave now
I'll sink to the bottom
and never get out

if you leave me
and I'm left all alone
i don't know how long I'll last
before i cut to the bone

through tendons and flesh
skin and vein
till I've bled out
every ounce of pain

so please don't leave me here

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  • 15 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I reread this today, monthes since i read anything youve written. i love it. but then, it gives me the right to call you a hypocrite. it really is beautiful.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 16 years ago

    by HollywoodSmile

    I think you need to work on syllables. just my opinion. but if this is about your gf, i advise you not to show her. that would be kind of cruel. and youre not alone.

    --TheGothicAlbino

  • 16 years ago

    by needing a miracle

    Thats a great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    One Word: WOW!
    This Poem...It's so vivid in my mind as i read it. It is amazing. The emotion is there completely, I Must say. It's difficult not to be amazed by this poem.
    Hope you're ok though <3
    5/5
    Keep it up!

    Take Care
    -Ally