I love everything about you,
the way you smile,
the way you talk,
even the way you walk.
I love everything about you.
Everyday i wake up,
i think about you,
And i start to wonder
Is she thinking about me too?
Do you ever find yourself lost in thought?
Talking about crazy stuff.
I do, because Shelby.. your all i think about.
thats why, i love everything about you baby girl.
Ah baby girl. I hate that. Ha. That cutesty wootsty nick name bothers me for some reason. :) Anyways! On to the poem! :D
I liked it. ^_^ I can relate to it (who couldn't?!?!). It was short yet sweet. If this is a rhyming poem it's not consistent. Once again remember the picture frame conversation we talked about. Capitalize those I's. :) Overall I'm going to give you a four. Something about this poem makes me very happy and just reminds me of what love feels like and how wonderful it is. That's the whole point of being a poet. To be able to reach deep into people's hearts. You did that very well. Four indeed. :) <3