Comments : Rockstar

  • 9 years ago

    by Valiantpenguin

    This is so true. I love the wording. very good

  • 9 years ago

    by Hebe

    Thought this was a pretty good poem.
    Think this could be the life of some 'stars'
    All that attention, must sometimes be difficult.
    Think you wrote that down very good.
    The word choice was great.
    An enjoyable read.
    Take care

  • 9 years ago

    by Lemma

    I really like the rhyme scheme in this one, it's a little different to that of the poems I normally read and a topic that isn't really covered. Nice and refreshing and original and sadly very true! 5/5

    Em xXx

  • 9 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love how this rhymes and the words you used were perfect, the title was perfect to!
    Keep up the great work!

  • 9 years ago

    by Cherise

    Wow, Wonderful,
    and so true too, it's sorta gets me thinking about the classic guys..you know likw Hendrix, Morrison etc.
    Groovy job.:P

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on the win.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 9 years ago

    by Ixora

    Such a passionate poem..very strong

    *^*crow*^*

  • 9 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow!!!! you are sooo talented, I don know which stanza was my fav the whole poem was great

  • 9 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow this is really good. it is very smooth. I love it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mia

    Your poem flowed beautiful.The words you chose are outragesly great. keep up the good work. the rythm of the poem, it was........ mind bending. whomever thought that your poem was perposterous, is perposterous.

    /*<miabanda>*\

  • 9 years ago

    by Gness

    I like the short rhyme scheme but with lots of meaning 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Lu

    Your pen has flowed with neon words and captivated my attention.

    The content of this piece holds truth and the title could not fit more perfectly.

    Liquid screams
    And cocaine dreams
    Dripping down the road
    ^^^
    I am in awe of this beginning stanza .... such a vivid picture your words paint!
    I love the style, content and flow ... well done

    Congrats on hitting the front pages with this write .... very well deserved piece!

  • 9 years ago

    by imaginenation

    This poem is really good, it has flow and paints a picture, very descriptive. its one of the best i've seen. very good. continue to write. def.

  • 9 years ago

    by Kevin

    I think this piece is overly simplistic and if you don't mind me saying, a little cliche.

    It has no depth or mystery to it. It's almost as if you have taken a page of text about the perils of being a rock star and just cut out most of the words and kept the ones that rhyme.

    It's a good topic to write about, very current I suppose...but for me you could have really gone further with the idea and not just made tiny statements with each line.

    "screaming outside of songs
    fuelled with paled grains passion
    I do not drive the bus"

    I did that in 20 seconds and I think it holds more to it than what you wrote.

    I am not being offensive, really I'm not...I hope you see what I mean.

    Yours, Kevin.

  • 9 years ago

    by Amber Holley

    That was excellent of what you did...

  • OMG AWESOME

  • 9 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Amazing write!
    and its very true about a rockstar/singer life :)
    keep up the good writting

  • 9 years ago

    by xTruthxByxAccidentx

    Very Simple but it's great!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats very good xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Sarah

    Oh nice, a very well topic. The flow was perfect, and the rhyming was wonderful.
    ^^^
    Great job! [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarah