This is so true. I love the wording. very good

Thought this was a pretty good poem.
Think this could be the life of some 'stars'
All that attention, must sometimes be difficult.
Think you wrote that down very good.
The word choice was great.
An enjoyable read.
Take care

I really like the rhyme scheme in this one, it's a little different to that of the poems I normally read and a topic that isn't really covered. Nice and refreshing and original and sadly very true! 5/5

Em xXx

I love how this rhymes and the words you used were perfect, the title was perfect to!
Keep up the great work!

Wow, Wonderful,
and so true too, it's sorta gets me thinking about the classic guys..you know likw Hendrix, Morrison etc.
Groovy job.:P

Congrats on the win.
Take Care Cindy

Such a passionate poem..very strong

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Wow!!!! you are sooo talented, I don know which stanza was my fav the whole poem was great

Wow this is really good. it is very smooth. I love it.

Your poem flowed beautiful.The words you chose are outragesly great. keep up the good work. the rythm of the poem, it was........ mind bending. whomever thought that your poem was perposterous, is perposterous.

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I like the short rhyme scheme but with lots of meaning 5/5

Your pen has flowed with neon words and captivated my attention.

The content of this piece holds truth and the title could not fit more perfectly.

Liquid screams
And cocaine dreams
Dripping down the road
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I am in awe of this beginning stanza .... such a vivid picture your words paint!
I love the style, content and flow ... well done

Congrats on hitting the front pages with this write .... very well deserved piece!

This poem is really good, it has flow and paints a picture, very descriptive. its one of the best i've seen. very good. continue to write. def.

I think this piece is overly simplistic and if you don't mind me saying, a little cliche.

It has no depth or mystery to it. It's almost as if you have taken a page of text about the perils of being a rock star and just cut out most of the words and kept the ones that rhyme.

It's a good topic to write about, very current I suppose...but for me you could have really gone further with the idea and not just made tiny statements with each line.

"screaming outside of songs
fuelled with paled grains passion
I do not drive the bus"

I did that in 20 seconds and I think it holds more to it than what you wrote.

I am not being offensive, really I'm not...I hope you see what I mean.

Yours, Kevin.

That was excellent of what you did...

OMG AWESOME

Amazing write!
and its very true about a rockstar/singer life :)
keep up the good writting

Very Simple but it's great!!

Thats very good xx

Oh nice, a very well topic. The flow was perfect, and the rhyming was wonderful.
^^^
Great job! [5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarah