WHOA!!! That was just hell of amazing!!! I mean like really!! I just loved every bit of it, call me a freak why dont ya? I was very intense with it. I just couldnt stop reading but when it was over i cried for 3 minutes now here i am writting the comment but i just love it. Pure dark. Pure misery. At first i thought the girl was going to kill her father but bam she tries to cut herself to death but like i keep saying a wonderful job!!!!!!! AMAZING!! Really!!! You have such a talent o.o i wish i could give more than a 5/5 but between you and me itll be 500000000000/500000000000 :DDD
Wow, is this how you feel. my best friend just tried to kill himself. and it killed me. don't you ever think of how many people u would hurt if you killed your self. if you ever need to talk to someone send me a message. i'll listen to anything you have to say. i spent a long time in a mental inst. because of suicide. and i seen the effect it had on my family and it crused me.
WOW ... do you really go threw this ... ?
i know how it feels ...
i hope that you dont really have to put up with this and i hope that you dont think of suicide ...
but it is a excelent poem aii i really love it just becuase of the effort and feelng put into this poem
Wow. This is amazing. I can not believe how good this is. I almost cried reading the whole thing. I am so sorry if this is what you go through. I know what your going through though. Maybe not the parent part, but the Ms.Razorblade and Mr.Scissors part.