Comments : Mr. Scissors and Ms. Razor Blade

  • 9 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hiya Amber,
    This was predictable, but that didn't stop my skin from crawling. The image you created was crystal clear. You penned this so well.

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Dragon Slayer

    Are you really doing this? because i care about you, so please dont. 5/5!

  • 9 years ago

    by halie

    Wow its sad,
    is it true
    but rlly great it wuz full of suspense
    5/5
    i loved it
    :]

  • 9 years ago

    by MyMuse

    WHOA!!! That was just hell of amazing!!! I mean like really!! I just loved every bit of it, call me a freak why dont ya? I was very intense with it. I just couldnt stop reading but when it was over i cried for 3 minutes now here i am writting the comment but i just love it. Pure dark. Pure misery. At first i thought the girl was going to kill her father but bam she tries to cut herself to death but like i keep saying a wonderful job!!!!!!! AMAZING!! Really!!! You have such a talent o.o i wish i could give more than a 5/5 but between you and me itll be 500000000000/500000000000 :DDD

    Just Keep Up the Good Work
    Damn...

    With Care,
    CourtneyxHolland

  • 9 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    You put so much emotion into your poems i love them!
    this is my favourite tho, so sad!
    xo

  • 9 years ago

    by she

    Alot of feeling, sorry for you, hope things do get better, really

  • 9 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    So real, i was acting out your poem in my mind it was that clear....soooo sad though, i hope you are ok.....

  • 9 years ago

    by xXxPeRc0C3txXx

    Wow, is this how you feel. my best friend just tried to kill himself. and it killed me. don't you ever think of how many people u would hurt if you killed your self. if you ever need to talk to someone send me a message. i'll listen to anything you have to say. i spent a long time in a mental inst. because of suicide. and i seen the effect it had on my family and it crused me.

  • 9 years ago

    by BreathesToBleed

    WOW ... do you really go threw this ... ?
    i know how it feels ...
    i hope that you dont really have to put up with this and i hope that you dont think of suicide ...
    but it is a excelent poem aii i really love it just becuase of the effort and feelng put into this poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    I have one thing to say, cheer up, things do get better and dont worry, you can get through this!
    and remember suicide is never the answer,

  • 9 years ago

    by desiree

    Dangg.

    You're an |*awsome*| writer..
    I love your poem.
    You use excellent detail.

    Is this true though?
    Did he really do this to you & your mom?
    =-\

    -Message me (I'm concerned)
    I rate it a 5/5 =]

  • 9 years ago

    by RazorBladeRomance1905

    Omg, that was so good.....
    awesome writing i love it
    xoxo

  • 9 years ago

    by slowlyxfallingxapart

    Wow. This is amazing. I can not believe how good this is. I almost cried reading the whole thing. I am so sorry if this is what you go through. I know what your going through though. Maybe not the parent part, but the Ms.Razorblade and Mr.Scissors part.

  • 9 years ago

    by caitlin

    Wow this is a really sad but amazing story. if this is what your going through or need to talk then send me a msg. id love to talk to you. keep up the good work xx

  • 9 years ago

    by julisa

    Very good poem. I liked how you referred to the scissor and razor as Mr. and Mrs. keep writing you have talent.

  • 9 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Best poem i have read in a long time!!

    Amazing imagry and emotion used in this poem!

    Please keep writing!

    Danielle
    xx

    5/5

  • That truly was a great poem i thought she was going to kill her father but killed herself... Keep writing the imagery was brilliant.... Loved it im giving so much more then a five

  • 9 years ago

    by Katie

    This is soo sad, i was like crying in the middle of reading it :'(

  • 9 years ago

    by Denysia

    I freaking
    LOVE
    this poem
    omg your so...i needa better word then talented.
    Ok your so .AMAZING at writing =]

  • 9 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is just such a heart-felt and painful poem, I just dont know what to say. Only thing I can utter is, I'm touched.

    Keep doing what u do coz it works.

    Natalie.