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by Frank the Great Apr 10, 2008
Love, romance /
Tomorrow never comes
These days are really long, sometimes I feel like I don't belong
I should stay headstrong, but tomorrow never comes
I awake to the same day everyday, everyday that same day
I need a portal or even a gateway, but tomorrow never comes
Same thing over and over, my life just gets harder
I need another day for my heart to feel warmer, but tomorrow never comes
When will I leave this place, maybe sneak out thru my crawlspace?
If I run now it will be a never ending footrace, but tomorrow never comes
I get exited when I lay to sleep, but in the morning I just weep
This pain I have is skin deep, but tomorrow never comes
When will he come to sweep me away? Should I send out a mayday?
I guess ill just stay here and decay, but tomorrow never comes
I awoke to this great message, could this be my passage?
Finally freed to seek out a new voyage, but tomorrow never comes
Finally a new message, no longer will I be a hostage
He has come to fix the damage, but......but it's a new day, he heard my mayday
by Sora Lynn
I really liked this. it was very unique. very creative, and quite expressive. the flow wonderful and you got your message across perfectly. job well done. 5/5.
Amazing..you have a lot of talent for war poems. keep it up and smile alwayz!:]
I realli like it. its a very good poem easy to understand. like the repetitive.
I liked it great job!