Love And Lemonade ; A Perfect Combination

by ABake   May 11, 2008


Love is unwanted flowing from my eyes and soul,
I have been possessed by your charming personality;
Oh God, God please do not let this feeling slip away...
Eight months and I still get those little feelings,
The stars were our witness when we said the three words:
Who ever knew three words would of changed everything.
But we know now, and we still drink our lemonades,
Sometimes they're tart and your kisses take away the shock,
Putting me into something sort of like a diabetic coma-
But I have decided it is a love coma, kinda silly huh?
I swear my feet stop moving and my eyes don't blink,
My mouth goes dry and I am the world in your arms.
So darling, tell me how you feel and be very honest,
Even though honesty isn't always the best quality-
I accept you for who you are and I love you regardless.
Even if your hair is a mess, or you have a hole in your shirt,
My heart belongs to you and that my love is a fact.
They say you can prove facts, but this has been proven;
On the date we call our anniversary, the day of the 12th,
It's a very special day, a special day indeed and we still-
We still drink our lemonade, it's grown sweeter since then;
And so have your kisses, I feel a love coma coming about.
But baby, there is nothing wrong with them at all...

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  • 15 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    It had it's need of fix-ups, but it was such an enjoyable read.

    please do not let
    `I think it would flow better if it were "don't" instead of do not.

    little feelings
    `you use it twice in two lines that come right after each other, and the repetition makes the piece sound less smooth . same goes for the "three words" in the two lines after that.

    But we know now, and we still drink our lemonades,
    Sometimes they're tart and your kisses take away the shock,
    Putting me into something sort of like a diabetic coma-
    `This made me smile :) It's fascinatingly cute, and charming. It's so real ... and the emotion is just evident that the sweetness is overwhelming.

    Even if your hair is a mess, or you have a hole in your shirt,
    `HAHAHA I love this poem!

    You have a way of writing that's REAL. It's not full of confusing meanings that you have to look for, and yet it's ... deep, because your emotions are running through the lines. Beautifully written, love.

    ..__MiNDYY

  • 15 years ago

    by Asher

    Its so goergous!
    i love it
    ((5))

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    The name caught my eye
    had to read the poem
    it's very cute, sweet, and happy
    love coma-like the word you chose
    good work