by Invited   Jul 9, 2008

Why is the silence so deadly
And companionable wind move swiftly
Whilst I cry mercifully.
Why is the silence so deadly?

Why is the silence so eerie
That I ask myself merely
For the silence is so sickly.
That. Why is the silence so eerie?

Why is the silence so deathening
Yet its still mimicking-
Itself. So frightening.
Why is the silence so deathening?

Why is the silence reveling
In the boxed air.Selling-
Itself whole to the quitting
Breaking its silence and asking.
Why is the silence reveling?


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  • 9 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Amazing! Great flow and a really nice poem. 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Osita

    That was very good I think you deserve a medal!

  • 10 years ago

    by halie

    i loved it
    you did a great job,
    and great write


    p.s thanks for the comment

  • 10 years ago

    by Jim McMillen the man within

    This is a very good poem, I can relate to it so well. It seems that sometimes the silence can be so strong it can almost have an echo of its own that only magnifies the emptiness of your surroundings. --- very good description of a unique concept --5/5...JIM

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Your amazing.
    dont be quiting
    writing anytime
    soon. promise?
    [: <3 [: <3 [: