Amazing Girl

by Justin   Jul 25, 2008


Your simply amazing is all i can //say//
Can make the sun come out on any rainy// //day//
All my bad thoughts are a virus and your my //vaccine//
Make my heart jump higher than a //trampoline//

When im alone in the dark you are my //light//
For you my love soars higher than any //kite//
When im with you girl i know everything will be //alright//
Even when my love is down seeing you makes it //reignite//

Theres just somthing about that amazing //girl//
Seeing her eyes gleam brighter than a //pearl//
From her personality to the way she makes her hair //curl//
There isnt a word on earth I could use to completly describe the //Amazing Girl//

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  • 11 years ago

    by Angel

    Aw thats really really cute :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Faith Ann

    Aww very sweet. put a smile on my face :)

  • 15 years ago

    by m i s s k a t e l y n

    This is cute, you did a phenonmenal job.and i love the way you seperated the rhymes, it made it more unique. but anyways, that was wayy good. keep it up dear, you have such talent. ♥ katelyn [ :

  • 15 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    THe last stanza was my favorite but the first two didnt really catch my eye. Thats just me however nice write.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow, that's so cute. I've been trying to write a similar poem about a guy for a while but I keep failing.. This is everything I was trying to say I reall love this piece. I hope everything works out between you!!

    Sole x

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