What a very lovely dedication for your poem..I liked the last part where you said about any guy and your mom not liking him at all no matter how good he will be, it was funny hahaha...and i loved the part where you tried to understand her in your own little ways...so cute...good one..
Again, this poem is cute. You wrote such a sweet poem for your mom's birthday, I'm sure she respected that.
The choosing of words here shows the benefits and problem sometimes with parents. I liked the rhyme and the flow was great.