I'm still here

by Alone in the crowd   Oct 3, 2008


Bring me back from this nightmare of dreams
it's where you left me to be
screaming in my sleep
but sleeping soundlessly

why don't you help me
like you said you always would
it's not like you to break this promise
you never have before

i promise to forget you juss like you forgot me
i promise to not need you juss like you don't need me
i promise to love you always
even if you don't love me

tossing and turning but staying as still as stong
i'm seeing you there
walking away as you often do
but you're always there waiting

i want things to be the way they were before
but i'm afraid that it won't happen
take me away from feeling anything
but bring me back to feel something

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  • 15 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Firstly please capitilize every first letter of every line please!! It is propper and a former pet peeze of a lot of poets..Other than that the poem is very choppy...Try to read it out loud and try to smooth it out..I feel the emotion in some aspects but its just not written as well

  • 15 years ago

    by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life

    Your porm is a little shaky but the messege in it and your pain was very strong.

    Keep writting!

    **Ada**
    *aBSwaBHiaPL*

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