A River Of Blood

by X Harlea X   Nov 15, 2008


Done with everything
Not listening to anything.
Wanting to end her life's misery
Life no longer filling her catastrophe.

Troublesome life putting her in agony
Pulling the gun up to her head; no more disasters.
The trigger gets pulled
Now her room is full.

Hearing the gun fired
they race up the stairs there faces uninspired.
It was like a river being a flood
Except this was a river of blood.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Faithless

    I can feel the character of the person in the poem. Though the character has a tragic ending yours doesn't have to be the same. You're still young n still have yet to see the rest of the world

  • 15 years ago

    by Dustin S

    Powerfull poem, good meaning to it. i like it, just not the topic its about

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