Suicide Virgin

by Anthony Duvalle   Dec 13, 2008


It's a terrifying sound when you can't fill your lungs
A song even worse when your heart speaks in tongues
Every word softly spoken now screams in agony
As you remember what she said and what you used to be
And I'll leave this world with the kick of a chair
The noose tightens and strangles and rips out my hair
But I never thought I'd yell this as I die
I love you, I love you, I love you...goodbye...

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  • 8 years ago

    by letmedie2night

    Wow..................

  • 8 years ago

    by CryBloodRedTears

    Omg this is a very good poem...i really liked reading it.. please continue with the good work...looking forward to reading more of your creativity.

  • 8 years ago

    by Steven Topaz

    This was a flawless unique poem, and the only thing i didnt like about it is the title, a good title but it doesnt tie into the poem, other than that, i dont know how someone gave you a 4.

  • 8 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow that the emotion you put into this was very strong. Your words painted a vivid picture in my mind. The way you ended it was my favorite part. 5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    This piece of work, expressed alot of emotions, and sent chills throughout my body 5/5