by Michael D Nalley Feb 16, 2009
category :
Dark, fantasy /
science fiction
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As the old lady walked through the city of the dead, |
by Nicko
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Michael you never cease to amaze me. a great read...and the postscript just adds to the picture |
by kelleyana
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Love the ending, great imagery and discreptive. Very well done5/5, kel. |
by trippetta TC
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Wish I would have read this on friday the 13th, but as there are 3 this year I think I'll bookmark it to read next month! |
by Austin
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This was very interesting. The topic was definitely a surprise, but I liked it. Not many other poets write like that on this site. |
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Quite the impressive piece here.. thank you for the description at the end it really makes more sense after reading that. Your rhyming was flawless, and everything just connected very well together, youve penned a great piece here. Well done! |