by Saul   Apr 8, 2009

The Darkness in my soul is always there
No concrete form invisible like air
But unlike the air i breathe to survive
It suffocates my soul in pain it thrives
The shadow I see when the light's about
Is the Darkness trying hard to get out
One day soon the shadow will have true form
And my body will be out of the norm
Instead of my shadow trying to be free
I will be the one trapped internally
My freed Shadow will be the one to grow
My once live body now merely Its shadow


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  • 1 year ago


    I just belatedly came across your poem Saul. It is good! A deep powerful piece, full of imagery.
    Well done. This is a good write.

  • 9 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A POWERFUL write!... I absolutely loved it :) You have a way of capturing the readers mind... and transporting them to the thoughts you are conveying... and the profoundness of them. A very unique and well written poem... DEEP :) Well done on this one!

    Take care, and keep writing!


  • 9 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really liked this one Saul. One of your best. Shanik

  • 9 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    Excellent poem

  • 9 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Hey Saul,

    Great poem I like the fact that it basically gives a different aspect or view every time you read it. It's like you notice something different every line. Very intruiging.. Already I've read it three times. Great work, I really enjoyed it.


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