Happy Birthday Lil Missy

by Cotton Candy Clouds   Apr 21, 2009


*ok some background information this is a poem i wrote for my brother he has this gf and it's her birthday today so i wrote this poem for her from him. His nickname for her is lil missy and he has had 11 other gf's and she is the only one that has truly stolen his heart. However, a lot of people don't think they should be together b/c he is 18 and she is 15. the way he first new he had feelings for her was when they were playing volleyball together for the church and he got so mad during the games but she could make him smile and laugh even though he really didn't want to*

Well, happy birthday lil missy!
I hope this will help make your day.
Maybe crack a little smile and for a
while, chase all your thoughts away.

One out of twelve, that just solidifies us.
Im actually thankful it took that long.
This makes me appreciate what we have,
and know that me and you truly do belong.

Youre incredibly unique in several ways.
I have never met a girl quit like you.
Youre subtle but made a huge impact on me.
I hate that people think together, we are a taboo.

I adore your endearing giggle
and that sparkle in your eyes.
I cherish the time we spend together
and absolutely despise those goodbyes.

I know that you get shy around me and
I still havent been able to figure out why.
You know that I love the adorable girl you are.
Look in my eyes: you can tell that isnt a lie.

You can make me laugh
when I absolutely dont want to,
and on relationships, you gave
me a totally new view.

You are the first and only girl I have ever felt
these immensely remarkable emotions for.
I hope this will cause your heart to simply melt
and makes your birthday better than ever before!

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  • 15 years ago

    by Clown

    Great poem, and very sweet of you to do for your brother. You must really love him, and you must be very approving of his relationship. I dont why people care so much about age, if your 15, you should date whomever you want has long has they treat you good. the way my brother put it is, "Age is purly mind over matter, if they dont mind, it dont matter," I hope well for your bro.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    You are the first and only girl I have ever felt
    these immensely remarkable emotions for.
    I hope this will cause your heart to simply melt
    and makes your birthday better than ever before!

    ^^
    A perfect ending to an incredibly sweet poem, Tabi!

    You are a good sister to do all this for your brother, I bet he loves you to bits:)

    About the age difference: I have had relationships with older boys too at that age. What is three years anyways? The only catch is that her parents could object, so it should be discussed with them. ( You can tell I am a mother now ey? he, he) I mean well, Tabi. I hope all works out well for your brother:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid