No more Control

by xXxemzxXx   Jun 5, 2009


Shadows all around
Your daunting face
Haunting me
Telling me i'm a disgrace...

I try and shake the thoughts,
But No
There still there
They won't go!!

You pull me down,
You still have control...
After all these years,
I just can't loosen your hold...

I'm still afraid of you,
The pain you caused...
The frightning feelings,
Leaving me distraught...

Not a single day goes by,
When i don't think of you...
The way you left me,
Battered and bruised!...

Night after Night,
Without a single break...
It WONT happen anymore
I've had all I can take!!

I know I should have done this sooner...
But only now do I have the strength to,
I want to let you know
All your control just shot through!!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    I like the short sentances, it made it easy to read. It flowed together really well, and the emotion in this was awesome... great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This poem has a unique style and is also filled with emotion. The way everything was portrayed was excellent. Very nice write.

  • 14 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    Very bland and unoriginal. Emotion is stale. Flow is all over the place, as well as punctuation.

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 14 years ago

    by Princess09

    Great poem. full of emotions n i like the diff structure!!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like the style. The use of short sentences makes me feel like you are shouting. Very effective. I love how pure the emotions are. Nothing seems forced. Very nice work. Nik

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