My Escape

by xXxemzxXx   May 28, 2009


The anger escapes,
With every cut I make...
The hurt escapes,
With every swipe I take...

People don't understand,
Why I do what I do...
But I'll tell you right now,
It's because of the pain you put me through...

You took everything away from me,
Took away my home, my life
The only thing I have left,
Is only my single knife...

This wasn't how my life,
Was supposed to be...
Now I'm stuck,
Living in a god damn misery...

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  • 14 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    Again, bland and unimaginative, with zero direction or purpose.

    Peace and prosperity,

    (RKD)

  • 14 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Amazing. Extremely well written with a very relatable topic. There's nothing wrong with the ryhming and format. It's basically a 'perfect' poemm in my eyes. i love it. keep it up. 5/5. ~KM~

  • 14 years ago

    by The Queen

    I agree, this poem was full of sadness and anger but expressed in a way that the readers would follow easily. The emotions were expressed continuously all throughout the poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Aww i really like this poem i can really feel it, it flows so nicely but once again is very sad.
    good job at showing emotions
    xoxo

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The dark emotion is expressed well in the poem and my hope is that the escape you write of is also escape from abuse. If this is not possible for some I prefer honesty

    well done

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