Well thank you all for your comments and to shadowmaker umm very imaginative and odd mind you have and yet i think your someone id get along with but he wasnt a disabled child or a PETA chicken he was an ex who was in a car crash and broke the majority of his body
This is excellent .. I think of you looking at a child with cerebral palsy or cystic fibrosis ; something they`re born with . It really appeals to anyone who's ever known any one with one of those illnesses . I like how you seperated it into two lines , it's really effective .
From reading it makes me think of my girlfriend. when I look at her I can honestly say that she is a scar angel with all the things she goes through she still comes to me smiles hugs kisses and all. your poems so far are touching my heart ina very good way keep up the work.
I love the way you listed all the negative things about the "angel" and let everybody know exactly what he wasn't, but then let it be known that you loved it regardless because it was yours and noone elses. Great job 5/5