This was amazing. I know the feeling that this poem describes, even though I'm a guy. I broke up with someone that I was truly, truly in love with, in december, on a friday. And when I hadn't yet moved on, she had gone on without me. I've got a new girlfriend now, and I love her more than I've loved anything in this entire world, but the old scars are still there.....an amazing read, keep it up! :)
Thanks to all you guys who read my poem and liked them. It's very difficult to forget someone you thought loved you but we have to go through many ups and downs to find our true love. but thanks again for commenting on my poem
What struck me most about this poem was the raw and honest emotions in it. You didn't hide it behind reason and you didn't cover it up which sometimes I find myself wanting to do whenever I write about something really personal.
A few spelling mistakes here and there, but it's nothing really.
I really enjoy reading your poetry as I've said in the last couple of comments I've posted, but it's very very true and I do believe you have a real talent for this. Even though the easiest thing to do is to write about something you've experienced and so on, the difficult thing is to turn it in to a piece of poetry that makes people not think about the words, but think about their own lives and experiences.
Great job on this, a clear 5, and I look forward to reading more of you.
Okay, so this caused me a total break down and I found myslef staring at your poem and sobbing with tears that I thought would never fall again for him. All of that because everything you describe in this poem reminds of him, even though it's been.....5 years now....December, Friday....his love and his kiss....and yes I see him with another person now, every single day, seeing how he kisses her and loves her...and it's so heartaching.....and in the end, when you say he probably doesn't even remember-I know how that feels, I see that he doesn't look at me with the loving eyes he once did.
If this is real for you too, than I'd like you to know that you're not the only one that feels that way about someone.
Great job. I've wanted to put something simular to this to express my feelings, but you've done a well job, and now i don't need to, I'll just put it in my fav and probably read it over and over until i grow strong enough to bare the pain, may be it'll help me move on.
Great poem. Wish i could rate it higher than 5.