I never..ever comment any poem with few words..
like never..It is not ME..
but allow me to say nothing more than :
I have no idea why i was so influenced by this poem..it is amazing for the deepness of it's concept.
i have read better poems, regarding the poems that are nominated for this week..but non gave me these thoughts -yet.
That this poem has given me.!
5/5 and i have nothing to pick out..even ig u got a gram mistake..i am not sure I was able to nice it..
I will pm u about that tho.
//We are blind and methodical.
We are fleeting and biased
And entitled and arbitrary.
// that is so true ...
truth and honesty and other virtues are disappearing so fast that I wonder if in coming years these will simply become words and nothing else
A philosophical write, I liked it very much..so much to ponder upon and you are very right in your perception of reality, apart from God pulling our strings, I think we design our own fate to a very great extent and are responsible for our own life.
A great poem and truly deserving of the Win you got. I was impressed by the simplicity of this poem and yet the rich meaning behind it if one thinks about what you are truly trying to say. Great job and keep writing.