Comments : Alter Egos

  • 7 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    "Because," said Reality calmly...

  • 7 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    "Because," said Reality, calmly...

    This is a well-presented
    and truly thought-provoking
    piece.....good show..

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    I never..ever comment any poem with few words..
    like never..It is not ME..

    but allow me to say nothing more than :

    fabulous !

    I have no idea why i was so influenced by this is amazing for the deepness of it's concept.
    i have read better poems, regarding the poems that are nominated for this week..but non gave me these thoughts -yet.
    That this poem has given me.!

    amazingly profound!

    5/5 and i have nothing to pick out..even ig u got a gram mistake..i am not sure I was able to nice it..
    I will pm u about that tho.

    well done

  • 7 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    //We are blind and methodical.
    We are fleeting and biased
    And entitled and arbitrary.
    // that is so true ...
    truth and honesty and other virtues are disappearing so fast that I wonder if in coming years these will simply become words and nothing else
    well penned.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A philosophical write, I liked it very much to ponder upon and you are very right in your perception of reality, apart from God pulling our strings, I think we design our own fate to a very great extent and are responsible for our own life.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A very insightful read and so very true! You
    have given each of them life and portrayed their true character...well done & congrats on the win!!

  • 7 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Congratulations on being a winner this week!
    keep up the good work!

    [not bad for a first time posting, huh?]

  • 7 years ago

    by Jad

    A great poem and truly deserving of the Win you got. I was impressed by the simplicity of this poem and yet the rich meaning behind it if one thinks about what you are truly trying to say. Great job and keep writing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Lu

    Congrats on your front page win.

    Gives the reader much to think about.
    Well done, congrats again

  • 7 years ago

    by Jessie

    I absolutely love it, a different style than what I am used to seeing and you definitely deserved the win:)

    great read


  • 7 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    What an inspiring poem. You portrayed them with great emotional thoughts!