A sensual poem with a lot of emotion in it. I like the way you wrote this referring to how a train departs and finally ends. Your creativity is really being seen in this poem and I am impressed as usual by your fantastic work you put into your poetry. I could only one day hope to do that. Anyway I really liked all the descriptions and the flow was right on with the poem from the start to finish. I am not a big lover of love poems but this poem was a different approach at the topic and I was taken away by it. Great job and keep writing.
Wow!! I love this poem - it's so well-written! I love the story you've told.. the title of the poem caught my attention.. and I love how you expressed such feelings and how an unknown destination can be so beautiful and wonderful... It made me want to join this train and find this place! I love the creativity behind this poem... I really enjoyed it! You really deserve to win :) Great job!
Mmmm I love the passion you can feel as you read this. It is so much more powerful because of the way you blended it in to the overall imagery--instead of blatantly hitting us over the head, its much more subtle and delicious. :)