I really liked how you used the works and names of other poets :] I thought that was a neat thing to do. You always write such touching poems and this one is just as good as the others I've read from you. Always full of emotion and nothing short of sweetness. Very nice poem indeed :] thanks for sharing deary. -Nik
A great poem, the kind that people will come back too. Thanks.
7 years ago
One thing that will make this poem 100% perfect, would be to not make each letter in the beginning capitalized unless there is a full stop before it. Grammatically speaking :)
Other than that..I can't wait to have my nominations for next week because this definitely gets one! I absolutely loved this. It was beautiful in all things romantic and poetry. I love the way you incorporated all the authors, some of the classics, with the perfect amounts of love poetry in ways only us writers can truly understand. This is beautiful!
This poem is not only lovely and tender but it
is also written with such beauty and warmth
I can feel the love radiate from your words! I
like how you incorporated each poet's and their poem with yours...beautiful, simply beautiful!!
Wow! Karl I'm speechless! This poem is SOOO beautiful and unique! And I must say it's hard for love poems to be unique sometimes but this was exceptional =) it gave me such a sweet feeling, this girl is super lucky! I loved the allusions to the famous poets and poems (which most are my favorite!) such a nice lovely poem... Great job!