Comments : Eternal Love

  • 7 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I really liked how you used the works and names of other poets :] I thought that was a neat thing to do. You always write such touching poems and this one is just as good as the others I've read from you. Always full of emotion and nothing short of sweetness. Very nice poem indeed :] thanks for sharing deary. -Nik

  • 7 years ago

    by Cayce

    Of John Keats and W.B. Yeats

    I just had to write a paper about him. Haha. :]

    "Once upon a midnight dreary"
    I spoke of Poe while weak a weary.

    Whoa. I love this part. I love Edgar Allan Poe, and I love how you used part of his poem in this. Amazing job!

    I think this poem is so interesting the way you mentioned all the other poet. I'm not much of a love poem kinda person, but this.. this one was so good and so unusual. I hate the cliche love poems.

    Great job!


  • 7 years ago

    by Milo

    A great poem, the kind that people will come back too. Thanks.

  • 7 years ago

    by Britt

    One thing that will make this poem 100% perfect, would be to not make each letter in the beginning capitalized unless there is a full stop before it. Grammatically speaking :)

    Other than that..I can't wait to have my nominations for next week because this definitely gets one! I absolutely loved this. It was beautiful in all things romantic and poetry. I love the way you incorporated all the authors, some of the classics, with the perfect amounts of love poetry in ways only us writers can truly understand. This is beautiful!

  • 7 years ago

    by mira

    You know i really smiled when i read it and my heart beatso fast every time i read it
    well done true feelings nice words and sensetive spirit(you're mine ,,,love that)

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Karluz i really loved this poem a lot, i dont love many love poems written here! but I really thought this wass hearfelt, well said, well expressed, well written!

    I love the way it was penned, and i love the emotions u touched ..
    better win!


  • 7 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Picky stuff:

    I spoke of Poe while weak a weary.
    ^^^ a = and

    it's true. E.E. said it best.
    ^^^ E.E. = e.e.

    Nice sampler

  • 7 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This poem is not only lovely and tender but it
    is also written with such beauty and warmth
    I can feel the love radiate from your words! I
    like how you incorporated each poet's and their poem with yours...beautiful, simply beautiful!!

  • 7 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! Karl I'm speechless! This poem is SOOO beautiful and unique! And I must say it's hard for love poems to be unique sometimes but this was exceptional =) it gave me such a sweet feeling, this girl is super lucky! I loved the allusions to the famous poets and poems (which most are my favorite!) such a nice lovely poem... Great job!

  • 6 years ago

    by Thermos

    Nice bro. original. catchy. nice flow. I bet all the ladies fall for this one