Space

by PinkyPrincess   May 16, 2011


Space
Like this [ ]
Time to be alone?
Time to be apart?

Distant hearts
beating without rhythm
out of synch
and empty of love.

Unavailable
barely any contact
sending letters
written in my mind.

Unreachable
Still awaiting a response
The remote is on pause
and time has stopped.

Your absence
make me stronger
prepares me for the
inevitable heartbreak

Space
How much?
[ ] or [ ]
It feels more like [ ]
- between us -

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  • 12 years ago

    by momopixie18

    !! i truelly loved the use of symbols! was cute and different.
    Space
    Like this [ ]
    ---makes me think of times when you really just cant hint at something, you need to just say what it is you need.
    sending letters
    written in my mind.
    ---very relatable
    Unreachable
    Still awaiting a response
    The remote is on pause
    and time has stopped.
    ---time stops when the one you love is unreachable.
    Your absence
    make me stronger
    prepares me for the
    inevitable heartbreak
    --i completly understand this, and a strong view to have, and just say that this is making me stronger
    Space
    How much?
    [ ] or [ ]
    It feels more like [ ]
    - between us -
    ----again, i just though the use of symbols is cute, good for you because i havent seen anyone else use this

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