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by Joseph Boadi
The wording the rhymes everything is perfect.i enjoyed every bit of it.this really amazing
Hey, thanks heaps :)
I love poems that get the point across really short and sweet. I find them harder to write. You did it well in this one. Really nice :)
Thank you :)
Its the joy of being in a new relationship and fresh love :)
Even though i had done this a year into it. Also your poems are awesome :)
by Robert Gardiner
Sweetly Beautiful, Nice Write!!!
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
I love rhymed poems and this one is one of my favourite. ... you rock it girl. ..
N.....I love this write.
you got the rhyming Meter down perfectly and I really love the feeling and atmosphere, word choice as usual was awesome too......
"A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb."
Freakin awesome. Enough said.Ben
Thanks for commenting Ben.. and taking the time to read :) especially on an old one :)
I guess rhyming is my strong point. Glad you enjoyed
Nams, this is just lovely. Beautifully written, rhyming throughout. I just love it! Hugs my friend-
Thanks Brenda :)
So inspirational, full of light, and hope. Tight well written verse, and rolled off of the tongue. A pleasure to read.
Thanks for reading Tony.
by CJ Maleney
I am so glad I stumbled upon this today.
I think we can all hit a dark patch at times. This totally lifted my spirits and it's a lovely little write.
glad it helped C :)
Your writing has improved so much USB. But this:
"And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong."
This is something that hits very deep. It wraps up the poem so well and with elegant beauty at that. Awesome stuff dudette :)
Thanks SC :)
Awww, a beautiful, calming piece, Nams. Loved it. Great write.