Comments : My Love

  • 6 years ago

    by Joseph Boadi

    The wording the rhymes everything is perfect.i enjoyed every bit of it.this really amazing

  • 6 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Hey, thanks heaps :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Maher

    I love poems that get the point across really short and sweet. I find them harder to write. You did it well in this one. Really nice :)

    • 1 year ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thank you :)
      Its the joy of being in a new relationship and fresh love :)
      Even though i had done this a year into it. Also your poems are awesome :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Sweetly Beautiful, Nice Write!!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I love rhymed poems and this one is one of my favourite. ... you rock it girl. ..

  • 8 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    N.....I love this write.

    you got the rhyming Meter down perfectly and I really love the feeling and atmosphere, word choice as usual was awesome too......

    "A special world for you and me
    A special bond one cannot see
    It wraps us up in its cocoon
    And holds us fiercely in its womb."

    ^^^^^^^^^
    Freakin awesome. Enough said.

    Ben

    • 8 months ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks for commenting Ben.. and taking the time to read :) especially on an old one :)

      I guess rhyming is my strong point. Glad you enjoyed

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    Nams, this is just lovely. Beautifully written, rhyming throughout. I just love it! Hugs my friend-

  • 7 months ago

    by Tony

    So inspirational, full of light, and hope. Tight well written verse, and rolled off of the tongue. A pleasure to read.

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I am so glad I stumbled upon this today.

    I think we can all hit a dark patch at times. This totally lifted my spirits and it's a lovely little write.

    Thank you

    Craig

  • 6 months ago

    by Maher

    Your writing has improved so much USB. But this:

    "And though at times a thread may break
    A new one forms in its wake
    To bind us closer and keep us strong
    In a special world, where we belong."

    This is something that hits very deep. It wraps up the poem so well and with elegant beauty at that. Awesome stuff dudette :)

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, a beautiful, calming piece, Nams. Loved it. Great write.