The wording the rhymes everything is perfect.i enjoyed every bit of it.this really amazing

Hey, thanks heaps :)

I love poems that get the point across really short and sweet. I find them harder to write. You did it well in this one. Really nice :)

Sweetly Beautiful, Nice Write!!!

I love rhymed poems and this one is one of my favourite. ... you rock it girl. ..

N.....I love this write.

you got the rhyming Meter down perfectly and I really love the feeling and atmosphere, word choice as usual was awesome too......

"A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb."

^^^^^^^^^
Freakin awesome. Enough said.

Ben

Nams, this is just lovely. Beautifully written, rhyming throughout. I just love it! Hugs my friend-

So inspirational, full of light, and hope. Tight well written verse, and rolled off of the tongue. A pleasure to read.

I am so glad I stumbled upon this today.

I think we can all hit a dark patch at times. This totally lifted my spirits and it's a lovely little write.

Thank you

Craig

Your writing has improved so much USB. But this:

"And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong."

This is something that hits very deep. It wraps up the poem so well and with elegant beauty at that. Awesome stuff dudette :)

Awww, a beautiful, calming piece, Nams. Loved it. Great write.