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by fatima Oct 26, 2011
Love, romance /
i love you
It was about ten years ago,
When I first met you.
I found you to be kind,
Caring and attractive too.
I always thought of you as perfect,
As someone so complete.
Thats why no one could match you,
It was very hard for anyone to compete.
Then I realised i didn't know you at all,
It was all in my head, a fragment of my imagination.
My concept of you wasn't really,
It was just my inf actuation.
I know we're too different,
We could never be together.
But there's a corner in my heart,
Where you'll remain forever.
For ten years Alex your,
Thoughts have been in my head,
Normally I overlook them,
But today I'm telling you instead.
A lovely little piece. When someone comes into our life's and touches our hearts, it's hard to get them out again, no matter what the circumstance.
All the best, Em
by Ben Pickard
That last couplet is excellent - an honest and moving piece. Well done, again with a nice flow.