And when Jenna breathed her final breath, she never felt more alive. Taking these pills every day just to survive. Its amazing how good cutting can make you feel. What the fake, red love flows proving Jenna is real. Choke on that, what you never believed was true. Treated her like dirt, what you never knew. Jenna was in love but she was afraid. Legit, you broke every promise you ever made. Jenna was jaded and broken inside. You came into the picture and every night Jenna cried. So happy, so trusting, Jenna gave you her heart. But you crushed it in your hands and ripped her apart. </3
Ok I liked this as I speaks volumes and is rather powerful but I must say without there being any line breaks so to speak it was a little off putting but that's just my opinion
4 years ago
by Burning Angel
I really love this poem. It is easy how you can decide to want to trust someone no matter what, then they always have their way of ruining it for you and making you feel as if nothing will ever be okay.
I really like the format of this poem because you are able to just write it all down and put it in a story format. It made it really easy to get into. Over all, the poem was one you could just connect to :)
Is Jenna a character in a movie, or your real name? Not sure by what name to call you now..Katie?
The poem rhymes and I like how you wrote it all down, just the format looks very much like one block and that makes it hard upon the eyes to read..but I guess you were so sad you just didn't care how it looked, right?
Sad message, and saddest part is that it never gets any better. People do this all the time and at any age and in every kind of relationship. But to be alone is even worse, so I decided to take the rose, thorns and all.
I was attaracted to this poem because my name is also Jenna :D
As for the poem itself I liked the read. It was intense and emotional and I loved the way the poem just grips you. You could tell there was a lot of pain behind the poem which makes me feel so sad. I really hope things improve for you.