Wonderful dream to say first...!
Its really feels so elated and refrshing to think of your love and you on an isolated place,cherishing the love you share and living every beautiful feeling that comes your way...:)
this poem makes me visualise the romantic delicacies of a beautiful couple....:))
overall a beautiful poem....
This poem is full of emotions. this is good work though there are some areas that seemed to turn off but i ignored those. Just a suggestion, the ending should be 'I love you too' and not 'love you too'
5 years ago
In a nutshell i agree entirely with britt. personally im not a huge love poem buff, but i think some how you could fit more of you into the poem. other than that i thought it was adorable, and it was an interesting scheme to write in, i might have to try it.