Nature of the Blues

I loved how you have analogize musical instruments, it actually makes the read flow like a song.

//Play me a sad song mother nature
this ole sapling wishes to grow
on stage with a seventeen piece band
strumming my sorrow with the best of them.

// loved these lines the most. specially strumming my sorrow part. That's very cleverly written.

There's so much beauty in you words, there's a longing, a desire and shades of sorrow and joy ... beautiful write.

Andrea, this is beautiful. The blues I could hear are amazing... I love all those notes oozing from each line, and the way you build this poem to match a story's structure is perfect. It even looks like a movie shot.
PERFECT.

I admire this poem!! Wow, it's so powerful. The words flow gracefully. Your work never fails to leave me pondering. This piece gave me chills Haha I love this stanza by the way;

Raindrops are crystal tears
cleansing a heartache
that sings like a sad song
within a steel guitar crescendo.

<3

Beautiful & Sad

Beautiful images, a wonderfully sad poem with great flow.
It caught the readers attention from the first and allowed the painting in words to become alive and vibrant..awesome

You're truly a nature lover. This poem radiates with words that flows freely like the early morning puff of breeze. I so much like how you match-make your words to produce spell-binding images. A very HUGE thank youuu for sharing poems embellish with the beauty of natue. You inspire me, this poem is revitalising to me. SPLENDID!