Hello i am a girl

by Jenn   Jun 27, 2004


Hello I am the girl that no body likes,
I am the girl, who lives with fright,
I am a girl who has gone throw pain
I am a person filled with shame
I think of myself badly I've done some horrible things

Things I'm not proud of things that bring pain
To my friends and my family to my heart and my soul
I've put myself down and my heart felt so cold
I hated it all but it wouldn't go away
Till the day I let go of all the shame and my pain
That day was the day I met you, you showed me the light and helped me get through...

Thank you.

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  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    Jenn, I really liked this and can relate in so many ways, I too am this girl or seem to be unfortunately.

    1: I like how you start here with hello as it connects to the reader that bit more (I think) we all make mistakes, have regrets and think we are under everyone when we are filled with darkness but truth is we at loved and though we are filled with pain and shame we are who we are and should change for no one. Though you may have done some bad things it doesn't matter, what matters is you learn from your mistakes.

    2: As I said earlier we have all done things we aren't proud of but all that matters is we learn from those mistakes. We have all hurt people whether intentionally or unintentionally but we just need to learn as life is one big learning curve and believe it or not none of us are perfect, far from it in fact.
    A sweet ending that shows there is light at the end of every dark tunnel, always a person that can support us and help us through.

    Great write, Em

    • 11 months ago

      by Jenn

      Thank You for reading and interpretation Em!
      :)

  • 11 months ago

    by Marvellous

    Truth acknowledged is hope reached for. Within every scar healing dwells. Through the crack, light can penetrate. There's always one out there who cares.

  • 13 years ago

    by little girl all alone

    i dont care wat any1 says that was a really good poem.....keep it up