Time wont slow down when you feel its going too fast,
you ask "how long will this last"
Time seems to go on no matter how bad it gets,
time just ends up leaving you with hurtful regrets.

How do you write so good, I adore this, I fall in love with your writing, your styler is so inspriing, 100/100 doesn't seem like a good enough rating

Aww thank you :]]

Good words. The moments we've lost to the machine called Time. If only we had the grand remote. If only to make some things ...better?
I like this write. Read it three times. Well done.

I like your work. This piece speaks the truth for me. Your style is your own and the way you work it is wonderful. Wording for me is just right, everything goes together with rhythm.
Good job! 5/5
~ Kitty

This is amazing nice work

I like the message behind this, the title drew me in, I was curious and intrigued.
The flow was smooth, and really good in places, there are a few issues with punctuation, aposrophe's missing and such...
and this line:

When your with the love of your life time seems to go by fast

The first "your", should be "you're" as in "you are", and there should be a comma after "life".

Such this made the piece a little rocky but content wise and message wise, very nice piece

Tara x

Wow!!!awesome job. I loved the last stanza especially...it really had a lot of power. I am going to keep a look out for any of your new poems :)

Loved it. You have related me to my past.

Loved it. You have related me to my past.