Room for Rent (collab with Jenni)

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Apr 1, 2012


Available for occupancy
a room for one, enriched
with a rustic western motif.
Secure! your safety is my
concern, your enjoyment
is guaranteed.

It's simply decorated in
romance, happiness lights
the room, while warmth
radiates from every wall
for that special person.

Should you apply, no money
is required a simple promise
to maintain it's delicate interior.

Auspicious accouncement
fullfills my desires completly;
privacy is confirmed and
meeting arranged.

Blown away by the landlord
and his fascinating charisma.

The viewing is delightful,
enchanted by the comfort,
that fondly embosoms me.
Delirious with joy because of
realising that my home is found.

Please vote and comment on her's as well

http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1193680

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  • 6 years ago

    by Wicked Ways

    This is a really sweet poem, you both flowed together very nice, lovely written both of you, awesome poem guys

    the sweetness in this is just tear worthy, lol its so romantic, and i like the title and how you incorporated that into this lovely piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! :) how you compared love with a home for rent, makes me think of an illustration about a house and to make the house look beautiful you decorate it and when a couple says kind words to the other and shows they love them by their actions each time they do so it is as if they're adding a piece of decor in the home and day by day it becomes something beautiful. Really nkice write, jyou also showed love is self sacrificing but it is a lovely thing, jthe comparison you made here was amazing! Nice write. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    "Should you apply, no money
    is required a simple promise
    to maintain it's delicate interior. "

    This one says it all! Love ask for nothing and it shows how much love there is by how much they take care of each other.

    I really enjoyed reading this poem.

  • 6 years ago

    by Karla

    Bowing to the King. Bravo my Lord.

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    You finally did it :)
    Wohooo. that is a magnificent piece of total harmony. The title, the opening and the end are wow!!