Do you have a story...??

Great poem with emotions..
i agree with purple

Thanks for pointing out that typo - will fix immediately!

Thanks to all for reading and commenting. (:

Wow, this is a very good poem. There is only one thing that I would change - last stanza second line 'band' should be 'ban' if you intended to mean to prevent catastrophes from happening.

I really like this poem as I said.

"I hear a story of a little girl, starving and in poverty
I hear a story of a race where there is no equality
I hear a story of a man, who jut lost his family
But do you have a story where we all live happily?"

^ In this part, I like how you mentioned stories that are either happening, or could happen, and then asked that one question. That one question has been asked multiple times, and I have yet to find a place where everyone lives happily. Perfect attention getter because it draws everyone in with the questions.

"We hear stories of disaster and of famine in the East;
West has genocide; North has war; South needs to feast
Where is the joy? Is it so hard to have a day of harmony?
So do you have a story where we all live happily?"

^ I like how you used current events. Makes the poem really relatable to the reader :]

I love this whole poem - it is now going into my favorites :)

Excellent
5/5

It is so sad to watch how people function
the world has not become a nice place to
be. Nobody seems to care anymore.
enjoyed reading

This is so fantastic, it really tells the story of how our world is today... catastrophe is everywhere and it's a shame. peace and happiness are rare nowadays. great job!
5/5