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by Janis Jul 2, 2012
Dark, fantasy /
As we stand here feeble, waiting;
Unable to disrupt horizon amassing;
The stgyian night is coming forth;
And we will need to prove our worth.
Death will cleanse us with it`s judgment.
Standing powerless in face of abandonment;
The only thing left is hope, an illusion;
Just absolute desire for swift retribution.
So expose your scarred naked body;
Let in soothing eternal pains melody;
Thrust it deep down your shallow veins;
Staying tranquil just so it sustains.
Grim melody of death pierces your heart;
Tearing all your weakened senses apart;
Agonizing yet subdued screams sharpen;
Just so your blinded eyes can be open. P.S.Half of credit goes to you rev for inspiration and idea! So thank you ^^
by Ingrid de Klerck
This left me sad, it reads like an ongoing ride through hell, with death at the end of it.
Well done on this grim piece,
Powerful poem Janis...great write :)
Well you turned my quote into a poem so the credit is yours. Amazing stuff as always mate.
Loved the flow Janis. Amazing piece.