Comments : Peaceful Buddha (Senryu)

  • 5 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Three powerful lines, saying it all
    I can tell she is a very special and unique
    person.
    beautiful

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    Powerful piece Ingrid! I like the numbering 5/7/5 syllables per line. Enjoyed the reading.
    Just change 'Seryu' in the title to 'Senryu'.
    ...Khalid...

    • 5 years ago

      by Ingrid de Klerck

      Thank you Dagmar and Khalid:)

      I didn't see the typo, so strange how we can be blind to our own faults..:)

      And Petra is an extraordinairy person indeed, she reminds me of Buddha very much..

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    So lovely Ingrid, I love the peace and serenity about this whole senryu. Very neat and beautiful dedication :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    Ingrid, that is a very beautiful piece. So creative and serene.. :)

  • 5 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Meditation is must in today's life..its gud to see u hv smone like petra to guide u..

  • 5 years ago

    by mandy

    The poem itself was a budding flower. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 5 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    I've seemed to have learned a new form of poetry :) This was really lovely Ingrid, meditation is always something to rely on in touch times. ((5))

  • 5 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Ingrid!!!