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by Dagmar Wilson
Three powerful lines, saying it all
I can tell she is a very special and unique
Powerful piece Ingrid! I like the numbering 5/7/5 syllables per line. Enjoyed the reading.
Just change 'Seryu' in the title to 'Senryu'.
by Ingrid de Klerck
Thank you Dagmar and Khalid:)
I didn't see the typo, so strange how we can be blind to our own faults..:)
And Petra is an extraordinairy person indeed, she reminds me of Buddha very much..
by Poet on the Piano
So lovely Ingrid, I love the peace and serenity about this whole senryu. Very neat and beautiful dedication :)
Ingrid, that is a very beautiful piece. So creative and serene.. :)
by average thoughts
Meditation is must in today's life..its gud to see u hv smone like petra to guide u..
The poem itself was a budding flower. 5/5
by X Harlea X
I've seemed to have learned a new form of poetry :) This was really lovely Ingrid, meditation is always something to rely on in touch times. ((5))
by Robert Gardiner