Dual Construction

The rhyming was awesome, not forced, just flowed naturally. I love this piece!

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People who know me and my writing can tell you I'm not a fan of rhyming poetry, however I've been liking your writes.

So call me
a builder of empires
The enhancer
of your inner desires

^ you always put in your stanzas that are always so interesting, so uniquely written that makes me really like the over all poem.

Nicely done Thomas

Nice piece, Thomas.

We put up a front sometimes, acting like everything is okay and trying to help others and do our job, etc... yet we can't fix ourselves, we are crumbling on the inside. Like the old saying goes "you cannot judge a book by it's cover" ... the outside may be pretty but the inside can be falling apart.

You captured a lot of emotion and depth in this.

Keep writing :)

This is one interesting piece Thomas
but so well written with honesty and
emotions. If only we knew how many
people go to their job on a daily basis
and towards the end of the day, they have
no where to go.