All that remains

Another amazing poem. The imagery is almost tangible, and it places you in the scene. Nice work!

U never fail to amaze me with ur words and ur magnificent poetry 5/5

I can feel the strong pain this poem holds, losing something you didnt want to lose.

Short and powerful, love this piece, great job:)

That's a powerful piece, TJ. And your diction is amazing... !

I will say, there was appropriate pain. But the core sentiment is resentment, not grief. Observe the vocabulary and the technical alignment. No metaphors depicting bittersweet comparison. There is a certain level of darkness, but mostly anger. Or may be it is me personally, who is engulfed with such vibe.

Nice to have you back brother.

very well written.