All that remains

by TJ Arizona Eagle   Aug 15, 2012


Putrid smell of decomposing passion
Leading to grotesque skeletal remains,
scarred by demoralizing words ,
cleave easily through tender flesh .

Corpse of prevailing existence,
meaningless emotions dwell , miscarried..
Impoverished house of lost enchantment,
liberated of a adherent heart

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  • 4 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Another amazing poem. The imagery is almost tangible, and it places you in the scene. Nice work!

  • 5 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    U never fail to amaze me with ur words and ur magnificent poetry 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I can feel the strong pain this poem holds, losing something you didnt want to lose.

    Short and powerful, love this piece, great job:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    That's a powerful piece, TJ. And your diction is amazing... !

  • 5 years ago

    by Exostosis

    I will say, there was appropriate pain. But the core sentiment is resentment, not grief. Observe the vocabulary and the technical alignment. No metaphors depicting bittersweet comparison. There is a certain level of darkness, but mostly anger. Or may be it is me personally, who is engulfed with such vibe.

    Nice to have you back brother.

    very well written.